Looking

[thenamesjes]

I looked you in the eyes

Comments

[m3ssyjesi]

Hmm, I am noticing the repition pattern with you, Jess. :) It really works with enforcing what you have in the poem, again, loved it. ^^ And the '...' works to kind of leave readers hanging and like expecting what would have happened. ^^

[anonymous]

i want you're amazing talent. no really i do, so be careful. hmm. i can totally picture the characters one has curly brown hair the other has...