someone inform the orange

[thenewlondoner]

Title: someone inform the orange
Pairing: Zico/Jaehyo (Jaeco/Zihyo no one is quite sure)
Group: Block B
Rating: NC-17
Notes: Oh, dear god. So the question was, how awkward would Jaehyo be whilst receiving a bj? And since Sara (lunaflew) needs to be converted to Jaeco, here we go. I will say right now I have never really written smut before so I think I was

Comments

[t_affa]

I'm happy for you and mad at you at the same time for writing this so splendidly. Deep. Sigh. Good job! <3

[thenewlondoner]

LMAO but why are you mad?? Thank you for reading it and commenting~ I'm glad you liked it :D

[t_affa]

for messing with my emotions!! and being a better writer than me~ hohoho

[thenewlondoner]

I'm sorry ;___; but your writing is really good! Your dialogue is always so funny :3

[blackheart_lies]

*flails*
omg so good!
yes! yes! yes! yes!
job well done ^^

[thenewlondoner]

Hehehe thank you~~ I'm glad it was okay and not terribly awkward ;___;

[nerveless]

first I kind of flailed around for a while because I have missed jaeco so very much and haven't read anything for them in forever. then I read through this and flailed around even more because this was so magnificently hot and realistic and perfect, I just want to hug you tight for writing it. I absolutely loved the fact that jiho was so obviously in an active role in the blowjob, how he didn't just do it to get his rocks off and cared so much about getting jaehyo's consent and using lube to make it easier and just being a generally awesome and conscientious and giving partner in the sex. I very rarely see that explored in smut and when I do see it I just fall all over myself at how much hotter it makes the actual smut writing. and the fact that the fic did not end there, and you actually went into the aftermath and the dealing with what happened and jaehyo's confusion and jiho's handling of it, that just put this fic over the top for me as incredibly well-written. I love love love everything about this. and and and jaehyo suddenly

[thenewlondoner]

WOW. Um, omg is it possible for me to flail over a review because I JUST DID, SO MUCH. I wish there was more Jaeco in the world, tbh, but it seems like there are very few writers on this ship. I WILL HUG YOU IF YOU WANT. You mentioned so many things that I was hoping would come across well enough in this fic so I'm really really glad that you picked up on them and liked them! I really enjoy it when both of the people in smut obviously want to be there and there's no 'no means yes' and yes, consent is wonderful, yes so good that you agree. Jaehyo wanted to be in control so badly and I'm glad you weren't just like WHY DID HE LEAVE ZICO HANGING because I was worried about that and yes, cheer the orange on~~ Jiho definitely overthinks things, but he's also the doer, I think, more willing to roll with what he thinks is right, especially since he's basically gotten over everything whatever he thought through so thoroughly and it just takes everyone more time to catch up with him when he's forging ahead with things they're still coming to

[rinhail]

dear lord, there goes my heart.
this was awesome. thanks for sharing.

[thenewlondoner]

omg why didn't i get this message until now THANK YOU idk where your heart is but mine is there too ;A;

[ranayura]

LMAO They are so, so sweet >< awww....