Then again you already knew that much. =). Love the plot that makes sense of s2's YED motivations, love Ava haunting Sam's dreams, love Dean just lurking in the background his problems looming. Love the last line.
All in all, fantastic. Nice way to bust into a fandom. (hurrah! Finally, I've converted you completely!)
...speaking of fic related hardship, I just might have a DW fic I'm working on and I'm terrified of Brit-speak.
Why thank you! Although let me tell you all about how stupid I am: I had posted this last night, got a few reviews, and then somehow deleted the entry. .:facepalm:. Seriously. You would think that I had never used a computer before.
...the WhoFic is currently four or five scenes that I love to pieces. One scene that just isn't working and absolutely no transition or connections between the things. I'll see how it sorts itself out and let you know as soon as it does.
Okay, I could have sworn I commented on this story yesterday, but now it seems to have disappeared so I'll comment again. I loved this story- it was beyond wow! I mean I think I've pretty much read all and every Sam/Ava (and even Dean/Ava) story out there but this one was so original and dark- which I totally like.
Anyway I loved the peek inside Sam's mind, the battle he seems to have with himself. And I loved Ava; I love the memory of her and the fantasy of her and the spirit of her that tries to redeem itself in the end. I also loved the way you managed to keep Dean in character since that is probably one of the hardest things to do when writing a Supernatural fic.
Anyway please, please write more Sam/Ava or continue this one!
Oh, no, you did comment yesterday, I just had a brain fart when I was editing it this morning and pressed "Delete" instead of "Save". I've been out of school for two days and my brain has already stopped functioning.
Thank you so much for reviewing (twice)! I'm glad to see you liked it. I've been reading all the Sam/Ava fic too because I adored Ava when she was on the show.
I hope I'll write more; I've got a few ideas banging around in my head, so hopefully they'll make their way out onto paper.
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Then again you already knew that much. =). Love the plot that makes sense of s2's YED motivations, love Ava haunting Sam's dreams, love Dean just lurking in the background his problems looming. Love the last line.
All in all, fantastic. Nice way to bust into a fandom. (hurrah! Finally, I've converted you completely!)
...speaking of fic related hardship, I just might have a DW fic I'm working on and I'm terrified of Brit-speak.
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WhoFic? I wanna see it!
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(ps TOMORROW GRADUATION! OMG!)
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Anyway I loved the peek inside Sam's mind, the battle he seems to have with himself. And I loved Ava; I love the memory of her and the fantasy of her and the spirit of her that tries to redeem itself in the end. I also loved the way you managed to keep Dean in character since that is probably one of the hardest things to do when writing a Supernatural fic.
Anyway please, please write more Sam/Ava or continue this one!
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Thank you so much for reviewing (twice)! I'm glad to see you liked it. I've been reading all the Sam/Ava fic too because I adored Ava when she was on the show.
I hope I'll write more; I've got a few ideas banging around in my head, so hopefully they'll make their way out onto paper.
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I loved the dreams and how they varied and Sam trying to figure everyhing out.
Okay, so this isn't the world's most cohert review, but I'm in a rush and just wanted to say how great I thought it was! :D
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Thanks for reading!
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I'm glad you liked it!
(And I would totally reply with a Dalek icon except I don't have one, so you'll just have to content yourself with Angel and Spike)
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