it started good... but i have no idea what happened.

Sep 02, 2010 22:43

I'm stuck within the pages of a novel no one wants to read
A useless protagonist like J.D. Salinger's Holden Caulfield
No grand Scheme or Goal
No adventure or battle

I am
Ernest Miller Hemingway's first five pages of Island in the stream
boring
wasted ink on pages that would be better used as kindling

Where is it?
The climax
The kick
The twist

Im flat-lining, ( Read more... )

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barbednoose September 4 2010, 01:22:56 UTC
another good one!

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theoneiforgot September 4 2010, 18:33:33 UTC
thanks dude! I kinda felt like it was missing an ending.

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