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[theoriginal_ist]

Title: Lelow 
Chapter: 3/? 
Rating: PG 
Disclaimer: I don’t own Inception. 
Pairing/Characters: Arthur/Eames, Phillipa, Mal, James, Cobb  
Summary: In which Phillipa is upset, James plays with dominos, and Arthur is worried. 
Author’s Note: Oh, self, why have you done this?  This chapter is kind of uh...darker.  No, it's not that chapter yet.  That

Comments

[my_doll]

Oh wow, that was a lot darker. As always very well written though. Poor Phillipa and James.
Eames needs to return to Arthur's home soon =(

[theoriginal_ist]

Yes, yes it was. It wasn't supposed to be! ::points at brain:: It made me!

::hugs the children:: It's not easy dealing with madness in a family I don't think.

Eames will be back very soon. Probably chapter three or four.

Thanks for reading and commenting. =)

[agonfiles]

I'm stalking this fic like I get paid for it. <3

Poor Phillipa... I love Arthur/Eames, but Mal and her children through this story is so sad. I love that you are writing about the children though.

[theoriginal_ist]

::throws over internet!money:: Now you are getting paid!

I love Arthur and Eames and Arthur/Eames too but I just really wanted to do something with the kids and Mal's madness and this is the monstrosity that came of it. ::sigh::

Anyway, thanks for taking the time to read and comment. =)

[agonfiles]

*grabs at money* YES. I knew if I stuck it out long enough, I could make a living off of this!

It is an awesome monstrosity... Though I'm dreading a bit what's going to happen when Mal dies... looking forward to how you write it, but dreading it.

And my pleasure. :D

[theoriginal_ist]

Haha. Sadly, I have not been so lucky, yet. Lol.

Uhhhhhhhhhh. You're giving it a swelled ego. And Mal's death. =( Is it terrible if I'm dreading writing it? ::sighs::

[clair3]

getting good!

[theoriginal_ist]

Woo! Lol.

[scoodoo58]

I quite like how dark this chapter felt, it is a tad sadistic of me, but the truth.

[theoriginal_ist]

All I can say is that I love angst. So it's not all that surprising for me. >.>

Glad you are enjoying it, thanks for commenting! =)

[zeto]

This chapter just makes me entirely sad. I like it but I don't like the direction it's going in...Does that make any sense?

[theoriginal_ist]

It makes sense. It's depressing and angsty and ::points at brain:: all it's fault. Thank you for reading though.