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Sep 05, 2010 01:02

Title: Lelow
Chapter: 9/?
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I don’t own Inception.
Pairing/Characters: Arthur/Eames, Phillipa, Mal, James, Cobb
Summary: In which the Phillipa dreams, James is a chocoholic, Eames gets a new nickname, Arthur chokes, and Cobb is adamant.
Author’s Note: I totally just got back from Inception. Omg, still so good. =) I'm ( Read more... )

inception, arthur, fanfiction, cobb, phillipa, arthur/eames, james

Comments 48

agonfiles September 8 2010, 03:10:32 UTC

The children are heartbreaking...

...but Uncle Eames... PFT. <3

theoriginal_ist September 8 2010, 22:30:10 UTC

I know, they really are. =(

Haha. Poor Phillipa has no idea what she's created now. =D

blacklabcoat September 8 2010, 12:50:45 UTC

I've just spent a few days reading Yellow and this (yes, I'm a slow reader) and let me just say there isn't one line that I don't love.

It's all so lovely and so heartbreaking... And thus, PERFECT.

(OMG, Uncle Eames. That's almost too cute to bear. And perceptive Phillipa is perceptive. "I think Uncle Arthur loves you too.” <3)

theoriginal_ist September 8 2010, 22:36:15 UTC

Aw! That's fine. Thank you for reading them both. =)

Psh, it's far from perfect, but thanks so much for saying it is. My face: =D

(Phillipa is a perceptive child. It's quite annoying, lol. Haha, she doesn't know what she's done, calling him Uncle Eames.)

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theoriginal_ist September 8 2010, 22:37:16 UTC

Aw, thank you! I am trying very hard on the realistic-ness of it. More should be up tonight.