[Fanfiction] An International Affair 2b/?

Aug 12, 2010 12:09

Second part of Chapter Two:

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theos99 August 12 2010, 21:06:22 UTC
thanks~!!!!! :) :) :)

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ninjasneaky August 13 2010, 07:15:12 UTC
I was a little confused with what Arthur was wearing, and the transition from 2a to 2b was tough, im not gonna lie, but other then that, fabulous.

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theos99 August 13 2010, 18:04:02 UTC
:) yeah - I was trying not to focus too much on describing what arthur was wearing because it was more from his perspective...hmmm....I'll have to work on tying scenes together....

thanks for commenting :) :)

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