I love your Will. I love that he's not afraid to be angry, not afraid to show that he's angry, not afraid to fall into his pain. That was so powerful. Well done!
*blush* Thanks so much. I was a little worried about my Will voice, but you know a man can only handle so much. It's about time that guy cracks. Even if he's only doing it in his dreams.
Wow. That has gotta be the best opening ever. And everything that followed it owned up to that stellar opening wonderfully.
Love your Will. Bitter, angry, but lonely enough to almostnearly wish that he was back in blissful ignorance. Or just for ignorance. Damn. Why is Syd the main character again?
Thanks for the compliments! And it's funny because I actually wrote the beginning part and then had to ask for help. I knew I had something but couldn't figure out what. *g*
Or just for ignorance. Which is kind of my feeling about why he went into Witness Protection. He wanted to lead a life where he knew nothing. Hiding/running away was the best way to do that... Poor guy.
Why is Syd the main character again? As much as I love Bradley Cooper he looked RIDICULOUS in that French get-up. Syd can pull off the costumes, Will notsomuch.
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Thanks so much. I was a little worried about my Will voice, but you know a man can only handle so much. It's about time that guy cracks. Even if he's only doing it in his dreams.
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whoa. that's fantastic.
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Will could definitely give Buffy a run-for Worst Life Ever. At least Will hasn't died yet. *g*
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Love your Will. Bitter, angry, but lonely enough to almostnearly wish that he was back in blissful ignorance. Or just for ignorance. Damn. Why is Syd the main character again?
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Or just for ignorance.
Which is kind of my feeling about why he went into Witness Protection. He wanted to lead a life where he knew nothing. Hiding/running away was the best way to do that... Poor guy.
Why is Syd the main character again?
As much as I love Bradley Cooper he looked RIDICULOUS in that French get-up. Syd can pull off the costumes, Will notsomuch.
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Thanks again!
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