Comments | thepheenixeyri: [lj idol] week 5: means to an end

thepheenixeyri

[lj idol] week 5: means to an end

Nov 19, 2009 08:38

Dear Shamor ( Read more... )

writing, lj idol week 5, lji s6

Comments 16

nightdrake November 19 2009, 15:41:36 UTC

Umm, what was the topic? *shrugs*

thepheenixeyri November 19 2009, 16:02:06 UTC

The topic was "bear false witness".

:)

Phoenix

nightdrake November 19 2009, 16:04:29 UTC

Oh, you didn't mention it in the initial entry, so I was like, "WTF is she talking about?

thepheenixeyri November 19 2009, 16:24:33 UTC

No, that was kind of my plan this time. I usually mention it, but I was flipping out something that was a bit different inevery sense of the word. :d So I just...didn't mention it this time.

marjory November 19 2009, 17:25:22 UTC

Great entry!

thepheenixeyri November 19 2009, 17:28:34 UTC

Thank you! :)

creature_girl08 November 19 2009, 20:07:56 UTC

After a wtf moment I realized what you did here. Love the entry. :)

shadowwolf13 November 20 2009, 06:48:35 UTC

It's an interesting piece though a bit hard to follow at first. It took a couple read throughs before I caught it ... and I don't know that readers / voters pressed for time would spend the time.

thepheenixeyri November 20 2009, 13:37:19 UTC

I know, and I thought about that after, But I wasn't sure how to make it any more obvious . It was one of these things that came to me and I wrote it because there wasn't anything else coming to me.

Thank you. :)

rattsu November 20 2009, 09:55:17 UTC

Interesting and thought provoking!

thepheenixeyri November 20 2009, 13:38:13 UTC

Thank you. :)