AND I THOUGHT SHE SLAPPED HIM. D:oldwhatshisnameJune 14 2009, 13:21:27 UTC
OH, INCEST. <3 WHERE ARE YOU NOW?
xD Lovely story, Nny. Quite lovely. I swear, it was adorable and cute and you couldn't even find the incest WRONG. You wrote and structured each paragraph in a way to make it seem as though it was FORGIVABLE. Like the hormones were SUPPOSED to happen, as was the kiss.
-nod-
~* <3 <3 DRELINOR <3 <3 *~
Wonderful [sexy~!] crack pairing that is, yes. And just when I thought no other couple could share Nataluke's spot on top. <3
Re: AND I THOUGHT SHE SLAPPED HIM. D:thepiss_artistJune 14 2009, 13:26:57 UTC
Rofl. What is with *bounce*?
And sorry, I couldn't reply via mobile anymore; the load bled a little too early. XD
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Anyway, thank you! That was sort of what I was going for. I didn't want to make it sound ~sinful~ or something like that. I thought about making it in Eli's point of view, just so the incest wouldn't be TOO obvious, but then I realized that it would be better to make it in Drefan's; it's just more cute and immature and adorable that way.
Which makes it forgivable, yeah. Because he's totally thirteen years old. <3
Thanks again! They're happy to share Nataluke's place. =D
Re: AND I THOUGHT SHE SLAPPED HIM. D:oldwhatshisnameJune 19 2009, 13:56:57 UTC
Hlool ~bounce is ~bounce. That's as simple as it gets.
I forgot we where even texting at that time. xDD
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Anyway, you're welcome! And there is no way it could be sinful. NO. WAY. I am properly scandalized at the mere suggestion of it, you hooligan! -lmao aunt Emma-
And, yes, I am perfectly happy with Drefan's POV because it is, indeed, adorable, and the QUICK.INTERRUPT. was just too precious for words. I wouldn't mind another story, though. This time in Elinor's POV, just so I get to know her mindset as well. :3
Re: AND I THOUGHT SHE SLAPPED HIM. D:thepiss_artistJune 19 2009, 14:01:57 UTC
~Bounce~ is strange. ~Bounce~ gives way for weird mental images.
Haha, Ikr? XD
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Whoot! I'M A HOOLIGAN. Lmao, I will forever love Aunt Emma for that Hooligan Comment. I'm sure Gwyn appreciates it. Deep down. Deep, deep down. He secretly wants to be called a Hooligan. ...And lol@you being scandalized.
Haha. The Quick. Interrupt. was actually a last minute addition. I'm glad I added it in. =] I think I'll make the next story in Elinor's POV, yeah. It'll probably be a bit more challenging, but I'm up for that challenge. XD I think her mindset is totally different, though.
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xD Lovely story, Nny. Quite lovely. I swear, it was adorable and cute and you couldn't even find the incest WRONG. You wrote and structured each paragraph in a way to make it seem as though it was FORGIVABLE. Like the hormones were SUPPOSED to happen, as was the kiss.
-nod-
~* <3 <3 DRELINOR <3 <3 *~
Wonderful [sexy~!] crack pairing that is, yes. And just when I thought no other couple could share Nataluke's spot on top. <3
~bounce
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And sorry, I couldn't reply via mobile anymore; the load bled a little too early. XD
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Anyway, thank you! That was sort of what I was going for. I didn't want to make it sound ~sinful~ or something like that. I thought about making it in Eli's point of view, just so the incest wouldn't be TOO obvious, but then I realized that it would be better to make it in Drefan's; it's just more cute and immature and adorable that way.
Which makes it forgivable, yeah. Because he's totally thirteen years old. <3
Thanks again! They're happy to share Nataluke's place. =D
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I forgot we where even texting at that time. xDD
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Anyway, you're welcome! And there is no way it could be sinful. NO. WAY. I am properly scandalized at the mere suggestion of it, you hooligan! -lmao aunt Emma-
And, yes, I am perfectly happy with Drefan's POV because it is, indeed, adorable, and the QUICK.INTERRUPT. was just too precious for words. I wouldn't mind another story, though. This time in Elinor's POV, just so I get to know her mindset as well. :3
Just a *hint.
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Haha, Ikr? XD
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Whoot! I'M A HOOLIGAN. Lmao, I will forever love Aunt Emma for that Hooligan Comment. I'm sure Gwyn appreciates it. Deep down. Deep, deep down. He secretly wants to be called a Hooligan. ...And lol@you being scandalized.
Haha. The Quick. Interrupt. was actually a last minute addition. I'm glad I added it in. =] I think I'll make the next story in Elinor's POV, yeah. It'll probably be a bit more challenging, but I'm up for that challenge. XD I think her mindset is totally different, though.
And I took that hint. Haha.
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