Comments | thepiss_artist: A story about sex, pretty much.

thepiss_artist

A story about sex, pretty much.

Aug 23, 2009 03:23

I haven't really written stories with sex before, so that must make it obvious that I have never written stories about sex, either. It's an interesting venture, though, writing one about such a topic. I'm not regretting that I wrote this story, and I am, in fact, rather happy that I was, with a bit of indie music and toasted bread and peanut butter ( Read more... )

you don't need to read this, writing and other similar stuff, crap that won't make sense to anyone

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lostinsalvation August 24 2009, 13:01:33 UTC

Like I said, it's extremely well-written. And adorable. I like the way you approached it, awkward-first-person narration, because it really got the point across that he was totes new at this. xD

Also, you knew when and how to tone it down and spice it up. That's pretty hard to achieve, I'm sure.

Excellent job, ~yeah.=D

thepiss_artist August 26 2009, 10:58:55 UTC

HUZZAH, THANK YEW.

AWKWARD FIRST PERSON NARRATIONS FTW. NYAHA.

I still can't get over "spice it up" and "tone it down". Lmao.

O_o

lostinsalvation August 28 2009, 13:22:05 UTC

SHE SLAPPED HIS HAND AWAY.

~LOVE.

UPSIDE-DOWN MOUNT FUJI'S.

ANOTHER PROMPT: RED BALLPEN. =D

acidic apple the iridescent anonymous August 29 2009, 01:17:47 UTC

ahahahahaha~ SEKS.<3

isn't it sad how I only read this now? And all this time I've been trying to steal~ your notebook.

And this is very lovely, spazz. Very real. Believable, if you will. And cute in that lolawkward kind of way. And I love smutty scenes that actually have a plot in them. You know, unlike those awkward little things with people screaming form start to end.

Case in point:

"AAAHHH!!!11!! YEESSSTOUCHMETHEREDAMMIT..!!11!!"

I don't like those. But I loved this one~

lol wet cave. Descriptive words make happy.

OOH. PROMPTS:

*"My but(t)s are for you to learn."
*Men situated between other men's legs.
*Gooey back.
*You got a big LOG.
*"I like BOYS... who dance with their friends." (did we make this an official prompt? It's wonderful though.)
*"He will spurt."

Also, I recall us having a kinky!mathematical discussion involving "the boys are together" and "different positions". Or was that just me? XD

PROMPT BLOCK. I'll be back. <3

Re: acidic apple the iridescent thepiss_artist August 29 2009, 06:12:54 UTC

LOL SEKS.

Well. It's not really sad. XD I don't see why it should be. And lol at me trying to keep my notebook from being stolen~

Somehow, seeing/hearing people type/say that this was "very believable" scares me. XD I wonder what I did to make it believable. But thank you! I DID want to make it lolawkward.

And "aah yes touch me there dammit" is just wrong. x__x ... Does this mean you've read/seen/whatever THOSE types of things before? :o

Wet cave. Lol Memoirs of a Geisha~

YAY PROMPTS. I'LL TAKE NOTE OF ALL THIS AND PUT THEM IN ONE GIGANTIC PROMPT THING. I think the "I like BOYS" one was made official. XD And so was the one in Math class about boys being together.

LAMEH.

What strange lives we lead.

PigTailCurler anonymous September 7 2009, 10:25:01 UTC

Hmmm. Interesting. 8D

Re: PigTailCurler thepiss_artist September 12 2009, 09:39:15 UTC

OF COURSE, PIG TAIL CURLER MAN.

OF COURSE.

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