virgin territory -- maxchallenge #4

[thepitcasualty]

Virgin territory lies somewhere beyond the friend zone,
And halfway between here and insanity
I’m your tour guide, Mary
(that’s not my real name, but some think otherwise)

The California Virgins Club is not revolutionary
Not reactionary.
We’re here. You’re not.  simple.
Central Coast Eric makes doe eyes at SoCal Mary
My cardigan stays buttoned all night.

Comments

[kidsinsuits]

This is fantastic! Really great. The "When did you decide to join" stanza is my favorite.

[almostzero]

way to surprise me. totally adapted it for yourself.

[almostzero]

and 2nd stanza is favorite. i wish i wrote it. its beautiful. use of friendddddddd in a poem.