Complementary

[theplanetpluto]

Fandom: Bleach
Title: Complementary
Characters: Ichigo/Rukia-esque, Isshin, Karin, Yuzu
Rating: G
Word Count: 995
Summary: Rukia muses to herself within the comfort of the Kurosaki family.
Comments: For _tehrin! I think you devoured Bleach faster than I did. :3

Comments

[_tehrin]

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FIRST COMMENT!!!!!

I do come up with some rather brilliant prompts if I may say so myself.

Anyway, I really like how you focused on Ichigo's contrasts, using his hands (who'd of thought hands could be so sexy!) as an example. Eyes too of course. I squeed when he was tucking his sisters into bed, all lovingly, and as soon as he realized someone was watching, his eyes hardened in his defense!

♥ Ichigo

[theplanetpluto]

ksdjfhksjdfh I like hands. >.>

Ichigo's so adorable. And he's such an awesome big brother, he just takes care of his sisters in his own way. He makes me want to hug him. X3

♥!

[laurie_bunter]

Gawd, you make Ichigo's hands sound so sexy, I want them to do naughty things all of the sudden... *evil grin*

[theplanetpluto]

Ichigo's hands ARE sexy. :3

[wicked_liz]

*wibbles* Great fic! I liked how he hid his hands when he realized she was paying attention *so cute*

I second the sexy hands doing naughty things!

[theplanetpluto]

Thanks! X3

[theplanetpluto]

Thank you!

[strandedthought]

Lovely! Great use of contrast, and I love that last two paragraphs!
The detail about her hands fitting easily into the glasses reminds me of not being able to wash/dry the tall thin glasses we have, it's so frustrating! Rukia's reflections and observations are written out very well. The part with him tucking his Yuzu in is adorable. Very in character, especially her wanting to learn how to use the washer and dryer.

[theplanetpluto]

Thank you! I love domestic scenes, and had to write one. X3