the stage is set. [10/11]

Jul 22, 2007 17:19

TITLE: The Stage Is Set. [10]
AUTHOR: therecordskipsx
RATING: R. Mature themes.
POV: Third-ish.
PAIRING: If you're reading, you know. =]
SUMMARY: AU. He met her on a Tuesday. Just an ordinary Tuesday, like any other day of the week, really, except that it wasn’t at all.DISCLAIMER: I don’t own or know them, and I am 200% certain this never happened ( Read more... )

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sam_i_am_not_2 July 22 2007, 21:52:46 UTC
Ryan stares hard in the mirror until his reflection blurs, forcing himself to meet his own eyes, swallowing, swallowing because his mouth is suddenly so very dry, bracing his hands on the wet ledge of the counter. Everything tilts and falls into nothing, and he doesn’t want to go back to the table.
Ouch. Poor Ryan. I just want to hug him.

Amazing chapter as usual, hun.

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therecordskipsx July 22 2007, 21:53:26 UTC
i would like to hug him too, in the story or IRL. whatev. =D

thank youu. ♥

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spencercensorrr July 22 2007, 22:17:36 UTC
Oh God..

Kayla. I'm not even gonna say it. You already know you're my hero.

“Hey, hey, where’r we goin’?”

“Crazy!” Shane giggles, and drags him out the door into the night.

“Already there!” Brendon shouts at the streetlamps, the smiling half moon, the sky. “Already there!”

That was cute =]

Ahh this was kind of sad. Ryan needs a hug. I'll volunteer =]

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therecordskipsx July 22 2007, 22:19:40 UTC
=D

my parents say that all the time when i ask where we're going, and i always laugh, i don't really know why. i think it's fun!

i would hug him, too. in the story or IRL. whatever. =D even though he'd probably be really hard to hug, you know, all pointy. lol. i'm squishy to hug, which makes me a good hugger. bwahaha.

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spencercensorrr July 22 2007, 22:25:23 UTC
haha me too. fluffy hugs <3

haha I'd feel like I'd break him.

Oh. You've seen the video for Cute Without The E, right?

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therecordskipsx July 22 2007, 22:26:44 UTC
=D

i would be scared to squeeze him, because yes, i might snap him. i am wayy shorter than him, but i definitely weight more than he does. heh.

yes'm, i have. =]

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jwalkontherocks July 22 2007, 22:25:30 UTC
I'm holding out for the last chapter. Cause you promised me a happy ending. And I feel like crying after I read this.

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therecordskipsx July 22 2007, 22:28:00 UTC
tomorrow, if i don't forget again. i'll try not to! i promisepromisepromiseee it's not a sad ending. i mean it's not cheesy, over the top, dramatically happy. but it's...i don't know, good. =]

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jwalkontherocks July 23 2007, 04:56:56 UTC
Oh goody! I feel much better now :) No rush, as long as I know that happiness is on the way!

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anonymous July 22 2007, 22:47:30 UTC
That was amazing.
I want to cry for one of them. I dont know who though. Maybe both of them. And I didnt like Shane at first, I dont know why. Maybe because thats my step dad name lol. But I like him now. He's a cool character. I cant wait for the ending but at the same time I dont want it to end.

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therecordskipsx July 22 2007, 22:48:36 UTC
thank you! it's sad, but it's going to be kind of fixed by the end, i promise. also, shane! he just sort of walked into the story one day and was like, hey, i'm taking brendon, and i was like, oh, alright. i kind of love him! =]

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anonymous July 22 2007, 23:03:34 UTC
He's an awesome character! Its actually kind of nice to see Brendon with someone other than Ryan. Weird but true.

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therecordskipsx July 22 2007, 23:05:51 UTC
he amuses me, and my brain made him up. i like that.

i think sometimes it's nice to see them with someone that isn't in the band or within their immediate circle of real-life friends. it's kind of a different take on things.

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shecriesx July 22 2007, 23:21:39 UTC
awesome. i love the new chapter, especially the last scene with ryan and brendon in the bathroom. it was like you could almost taste the tension you could sense was there and somehow, i'm glad you didn't have them kiss each other, because maybe this was even better than a kiss.
i'm leaving tomorrow for a week's vacation with relatives so if i'm gonna read the last chapter, it will be sometime later next week. i'm excited! :D

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therecordskipsx July 22 2007, 23:22:59 UTC
yeah, i didn't want them to kiss, just didn't seem right. glad this worked instead! =]

okee, it will wait patiently for your eyes. it won't go anywhere =]

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shecriesx July 22 2007, 23:24:00 UTC
hee, that's nice :D

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