the stage is set. [10/11]

[therecordskipsx]

TITLE: The Stage Is Set. [10]
AUTHOR: therecordskipsx
RATING: R. Mature themes.
POV: Third-ish.
PAIRING: If you're reading, you know. =]
SUMMARY: AU. He met her on a Tuesday. Just an ordinary Tuesday, like any other day of the week, really, except that it wasn’t at all.DISCLAIMER: I don’t own or know them, and I am 200% certain this never happened

Comments

[iluvbdenurie121]

aww.
this is so awesome
but awww

[therecordskipsx]

haha, thanks. =] sad is sometimes good.

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[strange_house]

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i dont know why but this chapter made me really sad

[therecordskipsx]

that seems to be the general consensus on this chapter, and it made me a little sad to write it, actually. =[

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[llama_bailey]

Aww. I think some part of me wanted them to kiss, but I was mostly hoping they wouldn't because that just wouldn't be fair to Shane.
I still feel sad for Ryan, though.
Also, I like how your use of detail is always perfectly visual without being overly wordy. When I try to make things detailed I often end up with a lot of confusing, hard-to-follow sentences. Haha.
I'm definitely adding this to memories when the last chapter is posted. :]

[therecordskipsx]

i kind of want to hug ryan. =[

thanks so much, that's always a really nice thing for me to hear. i'm sure your sentences aren't as confusing as you think! =]

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[therecordskipsx]

he could forget because that's the modus operandi of alcohol when it comes in contact with your body. =] haha. also, drunk brendon is possibly one of the funnest versions of brendon ever. =D

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[therecordskipsx]

bwahaha, true enough. i sometimes like when people write him really spazzy and little kid, but then sometimes i like when people write him serious, because everyone is serious sometimes! hehe.

[amoureuse_folle]

I definitely think people should use the word copasetic in conversation more. That would make my life so much more sparkly.

“Still pretty,” he says to himself, and he sounds bitter, strange, even to his own ears. “Still pretty.”

That was my favourite line. :) I liked the bathroom scene, in general, and I like the way things turned out. Although, at some point my brain went "threesome!" and that would have been cool too. :P (Really, no, I like this the way it is. I'm just sayin'. :D)

[therecordskipsx]

my mom says it all the time, and it's kind of wormed it's way into my vocabulary...although i did have to look up how to spell it. haha.

i'm sorry to say, but i'm really bad at smut! originally i had plans for teh sexytimes in this story, but it just wouldn't have worked out, you know, physically. haha.

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[amoureuse_folle]

I love ridiculous words like that. :D They're so much fun to use. And you get to sounds really obnoxious and pretentious. ;P

lol S'okay anyways, I don't think smut would really fit with this story, no matter how well it was written. It just seems like it would be forced to me. *shrug*

[therecordskipsx]

hehe. i like saying words that people don't know, and then having to explain them. then i feel really weird. =\

yeah. and plus, it would have required a hugeee time lapse and some weird pre-sex preparation if it were to have been ryan/brendon, and just, uhm. negatory. haha.