i love how you wrote everything that was happening when theres nothing going on, and you could feel the kind of boring feeling of it while keeping you interested...
hahahahahahaha. this made me laugh. it's true, there was nothing going on, which was why it said in the a/n that it was pointless. =D as long as it only felt boring, i'm good with that.
this is beaauuuttiiffuullll. you're a amazingly talented writer. you didn't even need to include actual "events" to keep me fixated till the end. amazing
if i'm to agree with that, simply for the sake of it, i think it mostly has to do with the fact that i have two years more practice. heh.
and if i didn't have so many frickin' end-of-highschool-forever type of assignments to do, perhaps it would be finished by now; school ruins everythinggg.
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even though i dissaprove of claiming it before reading, youre special.
hahahah ill be so embarrassed if this is just in your journal again!
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another work of art.
i love how you wrote everything that was happening when theres nothing going on, and you could feel the kind of boring feeling of it while keeping you interested...
jeez.
i need to work on my contradictions.
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this is so great!
i love your description skills. ♥
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Can't wait for your other one!!
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soon =D
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YAY! Tell me when it's up!
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and if i didn't have so many frickin' end-of-highschool-forever type of assignments to do, perhaps it would be finished by now; school ruins everythinggg.
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