let's call this the quiet city [1/1]

Jun 09, 2007 18:30

TITLE: Let's Call This The Quiet City.
AUTHOR: therecordskipsx
RATING: PG-13-ish...so that means you aren't legally allowed to read this if you aren't 13 or over or have a parent with you, which would be weird. Sorry, kiddos.
POV: Third-ish.
PAIRING: Ryan/Brendon. Why do you ask me this question, still?
SUMMARY: "It’s not like he couldn’t have seen it coming. ( Read more... )

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disarm_d June 10 2007, 01:34:31 UTC
Ohh, cool! I especially liked this line: “Why is this so easy?” Brendon whispers into the bend of his neck, where it smells like soap and skin, and slides his hand up his side, fingers fitting into the grooves of his ribs. “It shouldn’t be so easy, you know, for me to climb into this chair with you and kiss you like you aren’t my best friend.” :)

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therecordskipsx June 10 2007, 15:18:23 UTC
thank you, i think i'm kind of fond of that part myself, hehe.

thanks for reading =D

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ilyxxxhxc June 10 2007, 01:40:00 UTC
!!!!!!
*glares*

maybe if my internet wasnt so sketch, i could have gotten fc.

*cough-adjust collar-cough* not that that MATTERS or anything!!!

but wow, im SO glad you finished this.

...now i guess i have to finish my one that i was telling you about.

anyways, youre absolutely amazing, your morbid descriptions make my life, and this was fantastic!
(i especially liked the gravol reference :P)

<3<3<3<3<3...(and so on, until ryan gets fat)
bethany

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therecordskipsx June 10 2007, 15:19:56 UTC
aww, bethany. *hugs* haha. *kicks your internet*

erm, YES, you need to finish the one you were telling you about, and, haahahaha, i like it how you noticed that. it's like my favourite thing in the world.

i am so glad you liked it!

♥ x3467786789 (until jon looks like santa)

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lifexisxtragic June 10 2007, 03:32:36 UTC
I could probably fall out of my chair right now. But I'm trying to avoid that so I can type this comment.

Pretty much the most beautiful fanfic ever.
Gorgeous and well-written, what a wonderful pair :]
But seriously, great job.
I enjoyed reading it very much.
Your story made my night.

-Jess

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therecordskipsx June 10 2007, 15:21:09 UTC
oh dear, i certainly hope you didn't fall. i would feel terrible -___-;

however, i feel really really awesome that you liked it, and i'm very glad that it made your night!

thanks for reading =]

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blushandrecover June 10 2007, 05:55:00 UTC
I love the metaphors and language you used in this to an incredible extent. Nice, nice, nice.

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therecordskipsx June 10 2007, 15:21:43 UTC
XD thank you. i like them too. they make my writerly soul happy.

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idizzen June 10 2007, 13:37:00 UTC
amazing like woah. this was the first brendon/ryan i've read in the past six months and i totally adore it.

amazing

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therecordskipsx June 10 2007, 15:23:38 UTC
heh, i'm pretty much ryan/brendon twentyfourseven, threesixtyfive. i don't know how to write anything else, and thus reading other things sometimes hurts my brain. it's quite sad actually.

i'm glad i broke your six month streak and wasn't a disappointment! =D

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