falling over me like stars , skins, mini/liv, pgThe bass vibrates through the floor, rattles her legs and pumps the club into a fury. As people dance they're always pushing towards the center, towards the front, sweaty bodies moving in sync, brushing against each other violently. The crowd threatens to swallow Mini whole; she loses herself in the shuffle, can't remember which door they came through and where the DJ is stationed. She is all too aware of her body, her arms are appendages that don't belong to her; she doesn't know what to do with them. Mini bends her legs, bobs, shakes her head back and forth, hair flying in front of her face, sticking to her lipgloss. She's drowning in the beat, among the bodies
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eeeeeeeeeeeeeee, oh god, I was so excited to see this filled and this is perfect, seriously. The descriptions of the club are so vivid and vibrant and ugh I love it, and Miniiiiii and Livvvvvv, guh. My favourite, favourite part is how Liv makes Mini kiss her first because Mini needs that much control, just, yes.
Liv drops her wrist and Mini bites her lip. These actions feel connected.
I just love these sentences too, I can't even explain, but. The way you write their little actions through the whole thing is marvelous, really, it all feels so realistic and the language is gorgeous. BASICALLY, I LOVE IT, THANK YOU <3
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Liv drops her wrist and Mini bites her lip. These actions feel connected.
I just love these sentences too, I can't even explain, but. The way you write their little actions through the whole thing is marvelous, really, it all feels so realistic and the language is gorgeous. BASICALLY, I LOVE IT, THANK YOU <3
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