The Pink Sweater (2/?); Yoomin

Apr 17, 2009 22:12

Title: The Pink Sweater (2/?)
Pairing: Yoochun/Changmin
Rating: PG-13
Genre: High school fic (this is a genre, I swear)
A/N: Any and all con-crit is more than welcome.
Summary: How was Yoochun supposed to know returning the disgusting pink sweater would lead to Shim Changmin thinking he had the hots for him?

What a perfect time to run out of gas. )

fandom: dbsk, length: chaptered, genre: high school, rating: pg-13, pairing: yoochun/changmin, genre: comedy

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yumified_dbsk April 18 2009, 02:54:57 UTC
I'm sooooooo happy you've updated! *goes off to read* 8D

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yumified_dbsk April 18 2009, 03:12:48 UTC
This was sooooooo worth the wait. :D I absolutely loved it. The Yoomin development was so funny and sweet. And Junsu's little parts had me falling off my seat.
And you added Taemin! YAY! <3

I loved the way you described how Chunnie felt with his relationship with Min. It was written really well.

Update soon!!!!!!! <33333

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neko_chan13 April 18 2009, 03:17:18 UTC
Thank you so much for your enthusiasm. I was really anxious about this chapter, but you really helped with my doubts.

I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and I'll try to update as soon as possible. Sometimes, my writing gets out of hand and I end up writing monsters like this one, which takes more time than I expected.

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asianchik92 April 18 2009, 03:04:45 UTC
yay! i really like this....

and Question: where is your icon from???

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neko_chan13 April 18 2009, 03:09:31 UTC
Thanks!

It's from a webcomic, Pandect. I'd definitely recommend it, although it's pretty long, so you may not want to have to read all the pages.

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neko_chan13 April 18 2009, 03:17:52 UTC
hey.

I'm waiting for your comment like a creeper.

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neko_chan13 April 18 2009, 03:32:51 UTC
Dude. Leaving me 58374389137 comments is not cool. You're the creeper.

Um. Sooyeon likes big things. 8D
No, I kid. She just likes being fashionable, even during practice.

Biffelry is nice. I has it. Junsu is a slight pedo, but not really.

YAY FOR COMPLIMENTS TO MY DIALOGUE WHICH I THINK IS CRAP.

Part three...will come eventually. And possibly a part four.

SAMIRA WANTS JAILBAIT!TAEMIN TO GET MOLESTED BY PEDO!JUNSU.

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gompi April 18 2009, 03:48:21 UTC
hah Yoochun and Changmin's batter is so cute.

Is it just me or is Junsu planning something extremely evil?

XD, it's just me *covers face*

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