Oh man here we go i am posting the unnamed crossover first. I am tempted to put warnings on it of doom. This thing has been slightly beta-ed by the kind Treneka as in "Rhoda that doesn't make sense" when she read it on IM. So any crit is appreciated. As always i think the dialog is the best part.
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The third music room
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The twins teasing Hikaru is amusing, I'd almost say put some more scenes in like this to show the passage of time and their go improving. Plus there is so much fodder there for amusement.
So right the whole short long thing.... If you want I'll e-mail the long thing :P
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