Fic: Follow My Heartbeat [1/1]

Apr 03, 2011 19:20

Fandom: Hair/Across the Universe
Pairing: mild Claude/Berger
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,506
Summary: Max makes a friend on the plane heading to Vietnam.

Follow My Heartbeat )

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silvertwi April 4 2011, 02:03:38 UTC
I have no idea what 'verse you're writing in, but awesome story.

that I could have wanted Jeannie, because wanting Jeanie would have been so easy.

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therisendarking April 4 2011, 03:31:08 UTC
Hahaha thanks for pointing that out. Hopefully everything matches now.

And the current tour of Hair-verse. It's really the only one I've seen so far.

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eirenical April 5 2011, 03:39:03 UTC
Yay, someone else is writing Hair fanfiction! And it's a x-over with AtU, no less! ^_^

Very nicely done. I loved the awkward moments with Max and Claude and how Max was the one to reach out. Everything from Claude initially contemplating a "Manchester" accent to Max's idea to compare crazy friends was very sweet and completely believable. And, oh Claude... ;_; ...You poor, angsty, fatalistic baby. ;_; That stumbly letter was so completely him...

The whole second half of the fic was wonderfully sad, especially Max's panic about losing the letter. And Berger's reaction to finally getting it delivered.

Thank you for this! It's good to finally see some new interest in the fandom. ^_^ Please, feel free to write more! ^_~

Edit: Apparently, I'm not coherent tonight. I apologize for that. O_o;;; At least this came out in English. ^_~

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therisendarking April 6 2011, 19:45:51 UTC
Thank you :)

Yes, it's too bad that it is such a small fandom. I think I read through most of the fanfiction in a week. I may have to write more to fill that void in my life. lol

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eirenical April 6 2011, 19:52:32 UTC
No problem!

:-P I hear you. I've reached the point where I actually reread my own because there are so few others out there. -.-;;; So anything new is always refreshing and appreciated and I encourage you to write as many as you can! ;D

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