[screened to Sakaki]

[theryoudash]

Okay, you say write what you want to say and don't think about rules. It's lame but don't laugh!

In the morning I awake,
The rough thin fabric of the pillow case.
Yet again an ordinary day,
Where the soothing scent slowly fades away.
When this ain't meant to change,
I laugh and cry, then I love and hate.
This class, race and age,
The shallow empty future

Comments

[sakakitarou]

Well, you certainly managed to convey a clear message...

[theryoudash]

What's that supposed to mean?

[sakakitarou]

Simply that. Nothing more.

[theryoudash]

Was it not supposed to be clear? I don't know how not to be clear.