Bird's Bone: 7

[thesardine]

Title: Bird's Bone
Rating: R
Warnings: Bondage, Graphic Violence, Stockholm Syndrome, Mild Incestuous Themes
Characters: Sherlock, John, Mycroft, Moriarty
Summary:  "You want to know who's been terrorizing our dear Sherlock. Such nasty business. It wasn't me." He looked at Mycroft with wide, innocent eyes. "But you already know that, or I'd be dead

Comments

[alltoseek]

Amazingly well written, as always. Especially the Sherlock portions.

...could I get a scorecard? Too many brilliant people, I feel so lost. I suppose this is how John feels.

Poor John D: Poor Sherlock! D: D: D:

ps happy birthday! :D

[thesardine]

It's how I feel too sometimes! On the draft of this chapter, my betas were like "dude, this is all expository plot with no emotion," and I was like "I am just trying to keep up with the characters! I can't deal with their ~feelings~!! D:" Luckily for me Wren and Linden are not afraid to kick my ass until I deal with both aspects - emotional and plot - of the story.

By far, the hardest part has been trying to outsmart Mycroft Holmes. He is just having none of it. But if I can get Moriarty to play his cards right, he gives him a run for his money. At the end of the day, my motto is More Angst For Everybody!

Woohoo! Thank you! :D

[alltoseek]

More Angst For Everybody

I was thinking last night you'd better update soon because I cannot STAND being left with the image of Sherlock huddled up and rejecting John who is huddled up in his room D: D: D:

I want them out and about solving cases, dammit! Ears! :-)

You do the emotional parts so well - can't believe that part gives you trouble!

[thesardine]

I said that wrong - it usually doesn't. Organizing the plot can be so confusing sometimes that I end up focusing all my energy on that, while the emotional part that comes more easily gets shuffled to the background. Luckily it's a lot easier to fix it that way than the other way round!

[anonymous]

Yay new chapter! You have no idea how happy this makes me!