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Oct 26, 2007 00:49

"Seven Swans, never swaddled in your Ikea comforter. Instead we are both naked on top of the sheets, smoking a cigarette to ourselves. The window is open and draws the hanging smoke outside to the new dusk. I can see a lot of life in you. I can see a lot of bright in you. And I think the dress looks nice on you, he sang as I watched our pale ( Read more... )

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aicannibal October 26 2007, 18:24:00 UTC

Driving is balls at first, it took me about 3 months til i enjoyed. Just think of the freedom you'll have!

the_jerm October 26 2007, 23:02:42 UTC

I think it took me all of the moment it took me to get into the car. Excluding my time in Young Drivers, obviously, it's always been a good experience!

waif__ October 27 2007, 07:42:30 UTC

call me shallow, or not "deep" but if they were both naked together on the bed, how can he compliment her dress. she's naked. she's not wearing a dress.

Was the dress on earlier? As in, they took it off to get naked.

Was being naked metaphorical? As in, they were exposed to each other.

Is the dress metaphorical? As in, the way she is presenting herself, the way she wants the world to see her, in this "dress"?

HMMMM.

these_limbs October 29 2007, 01:17:17 UTC

IT'S A SONG LYRIC YOU ASSHOLE.

i love you.