Comments | theshinjukucroc: 5 Whip Lashes

theshinjukucroc

5 Whip Lashes - Text

Nov 19, 2011 02:32

( Beandick's Magical Adventures to Find His Balls (Cut for length...) )

no balls to be found, wrote a story, beandick, badfic weekend

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triessence November 19 2011, 07:38:01 UTC

The plot was decent, but your story telling could use work.

theshinjukucroc November 19 2011, 07:39:14 UTC

It's been awhile since I last had to write one.

triessence November 19 2011, 07:40:52 UTC

I wouldn't have thought you ever had it in you to write, with that skull of yours so full of shit.

theshinjukucroc November 19 2011, 07:49:16 UTC

It takes a head full of shit to recognize another.

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haring_to_go November 21 2011, 00:46:00 UTC

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I don't think this was entirely appropriate for all audiences. And your vocabulary could use improvement.

theshinjukucroc November 21 2011, 00:47:40 UTC

I don't give a shit about the audience.

Who are you anyway?

haring_to_go November 21 2011, 00:52:04 UTC

Then I would suggest you keep your literary creations private rather then posting them for all to see. Especially as you... do not care for the audience.

[ ahem ] And I am Liam Lunette. May I inquire after your own name?

theshinjukucroc November 21 2011, 00:55:02 UTC

Kaito Wanijima.

And this is a curse. There's no point in keeping it private.

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aettir November 23 2011, 07:23:12 UTC

Don't quit your day job.

theshinjukucroc November 23 2011, 07:25:38 UTC

Don't be such good source material then.

aettir November 23 2011, 07:30:50 UTC

You being a shitty writer's got nothing to do with me.

theshinjukucroc November 24 2011, 07:05:07 UTC

You're a good source material for shit.