Fic: Antimony (1/1)

Jul 16, 2009 12:49

Title: Antimony
Genre: Gen
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Redshirt death.
Summary: Jim Kirk comforts a younger crew member as the latter is dying. Oneshot, because I needed to write some angst.

Yes, the title is from the periodic table of the elements. :)

Antimony )

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culf July 16 2009, 19:28:21 UTC
That was really, really painful and touching. Well written, and left me feeling absolutely awful for the poor boy and his family. *sniffles*

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blcwriter July 16 2009, 19:43:13 UTC
Heavy is the head--- nicely done.

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x_erikah_x July 16 2009, 20:57:59 UTC
This was really touching. You were able to make me feel for the death of a nameless redshirt in such a short story. Very well done and excellently written.

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rae1013 July 17 2009, 00:13:33 UTC
That was beautifully done. *gutted*

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sakka July 18 2009, 04:15:25 UTC
Very lovely, bittersweet story. Thanks for sharing it.

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