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theshiva

Fic: Too Close (2/?)

Aug 15, 2009 23:36

Title: Too Close (2/?)
Genre: Gen, with some hurt/comfort.
Rating: PG-13
Notes: Originally written as a companion for this piece of artwork by
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theshiva August 16 2009, 18:36:48 UTC

Thanks! :-D You hit the nail on the head with your comment--that is exactly what I was going for in that first section. My muse actually took that part in about four different directions before settling on that.

I'm glad you liked it!

kiraboshi August 16 2009, 13:24:06 UTC

EEEEEEEEEE!!!

That wasn't terrible AT ALL! What the heck were you talking about, girl?! Amazing and wonderful. I love the flashback, and what's going on, and now captured! And Spock and McCoy came out GREAT.

Silly silly! Now you just HAVE to write more. *grin*

blcwriter August 17 2009, 16:58:44 UTC

So glad you are continuing with this.

theshiva August 18 2009, 00:46:40 UTC

Thanks! I'm so happy that you are enjoying this. I have to give you a lot of credit for encouraging me to post more often on LJ. :)

american_babyxx October 4 2009, 06:11:02 UTC

Loved the chapter. Hurt Jim :) Love it! Hope to see another chapter.

anonymous October 27 2010, 07:13:16 UTC

Post post post post post post post post
MORE PLEASE.