Doors and Walls

Apr 14, 2009 23:20

Title: Doors and Walls
Author: theskyturnsred
Pairing(s): Jo/Mäx
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I don't know any of the characters involved and I'm not associated with them in any way shape or form. Not harm is meant by this story.
Warnings: Slash. Masturbation. Voyeurism.
Summary: Fabi has a plan to ensure that he never has to see his brother jerking off again ( Read more... )

fic, killerpilze

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di_glossia April 15 2009, 04:57:47 UTC
Jesus, that was hot. I love how ludicrously bad Jo is at his plan and Fabi walking in on him not once but three fucking times and still being willing to help Jo. And, oh, god, they're beautiful together...
Wonderful

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theskyturnsred April 15 2009, 05:08:52 UTC
^.^ I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And yes, I'm not sure that in Fabi's position I'd be as helpful, but I'm sure he just wants his big brother to be happy, right?

Thanks for reading and commenting.

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evvva_90 April 15 2009, 05:27:21 UTC
I loved it.

Poor Fabi, having to walk in on Jo that many times. And it's so sweet of him to come up with a plan to get Mäx and Jo together.

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theskyturnsred April 15 2009, 05:33:16 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! And yes, I felt slightly horrible scandalizing poor Fabi, and I'm sure he's going to come to regret. I don't imagine walking in on Maex and Jo together is any more fun than walking in on just Jo.

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beren_writes April 15 2009, 06:27:48 UTC
LOL @ Fabi suffering for Max and Jo's longings.
All I can say is thank god for Fabi or the pair still wouldn't have a clue.

The ending was lovely, hot and touching.

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theskyturnsred April 15 2009, 17:52:35 UTC
Yes, Fabi is obviously the answer to everyone's problems. I wish I had a Fabi to fix my problems!

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for the kind words. ♥

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steinsgrrl April 15 2009, 07:23:36 UTC
Wow. Very nicely done! I haven't read much KiPi fic yet, but I'd gladly read more like this. :)

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theskyturnsred April 15 2009, 17:53:35 UTC
Awww! I'm glad you liked it. ^.^ Thanks for reading.

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mieka_writes April 15 2009, 14:24:30 UTC
Guh.. gods.. poor idiot boys...

are we 100% sure Fabi wasn't a woman in another life?

was to cute, sweet and HOT

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theskyturnsred April 15 2009, 17:54:25 UTC
Haha! He probably was. Thank the lord. The band needs at least one person with some sense of perception.

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mieka_writes April 15 2009, 18:04:25 UTC
there's just an irony factor with it coming out of the Youngest member of the band...

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theskyturnsred April 15 2009, 18:45:45 UTC
There is. But irony makes the world a better place.

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