Chapter 3: Omnicockity

[thesnofkim]

Title: Breathing Is A Necessity - Chapter 3: Omnicockity
Rating: NC-17
Summary: One-third Phoenix. One-third penis-pills. One-third sex .
Pairing: Gant/Edgeworth, Wright/Edgeworth in future chapters.  I guarantee some Phoenix/Edgey cuteness in the next chapter.
Author's Note: Thanks to everyone who left me a comment.

Posted this fic in three different

Comments

[prismatic_sky]

I've really been enjoying this. When I see that it's been updated, I get really excited XD

Also, poor poor Phoenix ;-;

And Gant is amazingly obnoxious and wonderful ♥ Thank you for writing :D

[anonymous]

I've got to say, I love your fiction. Gant does not get the time in fanfiction that he deserves. You've portrayed him as the odd man he is very well. Edgeworth is also cold, though a little on the extreme side, but it is a nice change over all of the angsting emo we usually see coming from him. Phoenix is perfect. He is that poor puppy dog that gets kicked in the face, that still whines back to his owner despite the abuse.

I'll admit, at first I didn't like the style of your writing, but it has grown on me. And I think the plot is nice. I love Gant, but how you write is really tugging on all of my heartstrings, as I can't decide between crazy, starting-to-get-obsessive Gant or poor, puppydog Phoenix.

So, please write more. I'm looking forward to the fluff that's coming up..

[anonymous]

Hey, it's the first anonymouse from last time! This story is coming along just beautifully, and I have to admit that I wibbled a bit for poor Phoenix... -_- (though his reassuring his own penis was brilliant). Here's hoping that his tenacity pays off SOON!

Hm, I may just *have* to make you some giftart pretty soon...

[anonymous]

I love this fic, it just has everything: I like your writing style, the characters are well... emh, characterized (I just don't like when they completely change the personality they have in the game/series when they make fics or doujins), the plot is really nice and so are the sex scenes... I must admit that I didn't like the first two too much, just oral sex and with both Gant and Edgeworth trying to be dominant. I liked more the copy machine scene where Edgeworth gave in a bit :) That one is terrific!

The infatuation that Phoenix feels for Edgeworth makes anyone's heart to hurt, and those who have been in a similar situation, to hurt even more. I love this character, it's always nice to feel that there's someone who will wait for you no matter how 'dirty' you are.

I'm looking forward to that next chapter.

[relmneiko]