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[Fic] Serenity

Jan 13, 2016 22:47

Title: Serenity
Rating: PG (the fluffiest, idk)
Pairing: Jongin/Kyungsoo
Length: 2800w
Summary: Jongin and Kyungsoo celebrate their anniversary.

( The story of their love is written in smile lines and streaks of gray hair they wear like badges of honor. )

length: short, rating: pg, pairing: kai/kyungsoo, group: exo

Comments 6

lotusk January 15 2016, 03:32:09 UTC

Where do I begin describing such a precious, wonderful fic? I can think of so many adjectives but cute is not one of them. This is such a tender and poignant love story and Kyungsoo and Jongin's devotion for each other comes through in every line. Everything from the way they grumble at each other to the way their kids sass them and the way they sass each other. Kyungsoo's schedule and the way jongin indulges him, I'm crying! The warm note of humor that you managed to weave through the entire fic is just ♡.

This is beautiful: The story of their love is written in smile lines and streaks of gray hair they wear like badges of honor. It’s etched in the way they know just what the other is thinking with a simple look. There's history in how they move around each other, a dance they learned many years ago.. The picnic is beautiful. The fact that Kyungsoo planned the whole bringing Jongin back to the abandoned studio where he used to work and cleaning it beforehand and that just made me cry ;;; and Jongin thanking him for taking a chance ( ... )