Comments | thesockmonster: [Advent] Day 22

thesockmonster

[Advent] Day 22

Jan 28, 2016 21:52

For: ilgeniodelmale
Rating: PG13
Pairing: Chanyeol-centric plus Chanyeol/Sehun/Jongin
Length: 1k
Author's Note: I really feel like I botched this one up. Sorry if it's not what you were wanting.
Summary: Loss is a part of life.

( Chanyeol’s lost a lot of things in his life. )

length: drabble, group: exo, ot3: kai/sehun/chanyeol, advent 2014, rating: pg-13

Comments 3

inky_starlight January 29 2016, 04:21:16 UTC

This is really sweet, but so sad at the same time!

ilgeniodelmale January 29 2016, 10:59:10 UTC

Thank you, I'm moved! *hugs*

oldwillow_brook January 30 2016, 21:25:42 UTC

The haunting feeling, the optimistic reality of life in this fic hurts me in way I didn't quite expect. I didn't really think that 1k could hurt me and make feel understood and complete in a way that this fic did.

You write so truthfully, and so clearly. You write in a way where I feel like my emotions, my feelings, that hole we ALL have in our hearts are true and normal and right. Chanyeol's pain, of living and losing, of loving and losing is beautiful in ways I can't explain. My heart feels hollow but I feel ....understood if that makes sense.

It was empowering, knowing that he could rationalize the loss and the sadness ebbed from the edges of his heart until it’s as if he’d never felt it at all. I sort of knew I was done for when you wrote this line. First off its such a beautifully written line. MAN if I could dissect just this line for my entire comment I would just because this is the beginning of everything that's beautiful with this fic ( ... )