Comments | thesockmonster: [Advent] Day 18

thesockmonster

[Advent] Day 18

Mar 04, 2016 15:40

For: fuyuko_6
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Jongin/Yifan
Length: 2.3k
Summary: Jongin wants to have a baby - a side story from Trial and Error.

( So many omegas are pregnant now, Sehun and Baekhyun being among the first. )

length: drabble, advent 2015, pairing: kris/kai, rating: nc-17

Comments 11

pika_chan92 March 4 2016, 22:57:20 UTC

I'm melting, bye!

inky_starlight March 4 2016, 23:06:12 UTC

Oh my goodness, I'm going to cry! I LOVE Trial and Error and I love this! Oh my goodness Jongin and Yifan are so sweet! And the ending!! Oh my goodness, I'm so happy!

fuyuko_6 March 5 2016, 00:24:18 UTC

Trial and Error is one of my favourite fanfics. I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS WORLD YOU'VE CREATED!!!!

This side story was much better than the one I had in my mind since I read Trial and Error.

One of my favourite things about Trial and Error was that they would lie all over each other. It was so lovely seeing that again.

SEHUUUUUN!! I want to hold him so much. What an adorable person. I love the relationships the omegas have with each other. They're so comforting and warm and such a strong support for each other. It really makes me so happy when they're being clingy. I want someone to hold me now, or I want to hold someone else, either one is fine. I want to hold YOU for writing such a beautiful story.

Ok, quote and spazz time!!!!

"The rumbling of Yifan’s voice is comforting along Jongin’s back, but he’s not listening to the words. They’re not meant for him. Yifan is talking to Kyungsoo, one of the alphas who has begun to rise in the ranks of the hunters. He comes around often now, sometimes because the other ( ... )

fuyuko_6 March 5 2016, 00:25:06 UTC

continued...

Aaaaw baby!! Come here please, let me hold you and pat you. You're so precious. Bunny, this just reminds me of how he confessed to someone about his feelings for Yifan, which was the reason why I really wanted to read their side story. It was the way he said it that just made my heart melt.

"He’d snuck away when he felt a little dizzy, wandering over to where Sehun is resting on a pile of furs with Lu Han propping him up. It’s not often that Sehun indulges in pampering Jongin, but it’s been known to happen on the occasion. He combs his fingers softly through Jongin’s hair as Jongin leans against him. Lu Han had moved his arm so Sehun could drag Jongin closer, but his other arm is still protectively wrapped around Sehun’s belly."

How can anyone not want to pamper Jongin? He's so pamper worthy. He deserves to be pampered, touched and caressed 24/7. And I love Alpha Luhan being all protective over his mate.

'“Are you feeling alright?” Joonmyun queries when Jongin hooks his chin on Joonmyun’s shoulder and slumps against ( ... )

fuyuko_6 March 5 2016, 00:25:42 UTC

Continued ( ... )

blarry150 March 5 2016, 00:57:50 UTC

It's so niceeeeee

naegastar March 5 2016, 11:46:10 UTC

Ooooh this is so nice ;A; I love the Trial and Error AU and knowing that Jongin and Yifan are happy (and get to start a family too!) is just...I feel warm and fuzzy c: