correct puncuation at its worst

[thesoftkisses]

public for a reason

these tears.. I cry
they are real
but where are they?
i feel them...
but are they visible
to anyone?
you come into my world
and shatter it
like a baseball would....
....a beautiful stained glass window.
*ahem*
fuck youwhen I lay over that ceramic bowl

Comments

[penser]

pretty powerful..
difficult to be so fragile while expressing constant strength and confidence.

[thesoftkisses]

fragile?

it sucks when a person can mess your life up like that

[relicz]

you meet these people and you think hey this is the one especially if you have never felt that way about anyone before. those first few months are great because everything feels so new when you do them with someone you love. they say the right thinggs, do the rigght things and make you feel like youre special because youve got someone to love you and to love. But its the secrets that kill it all that an ego because even though you can deal with their faults and shortcommings they cant and they hate you for being a better person and trying to help them through it all. I used to think with her that you know im going to do all the right things and put her needs before my own because thats what a good relationship should be but now i dont know. ive long since killed the notion that there is anything perfect in this world and it hurts to know you gave so much and got back nothing but hate and betrayal in return. maybe were all just better off alone. but youre not a whore and i wasnt wrong for tryin to help her beat her demons.

[thesoftkisses]

um, yeah... interesting thing is.. that was written for my mother.
I try not to put that much thought into the one who called me a whore. I know I'm not. He's just mad he's not with me and that my life is somewhat stable. Well, not emotionally.
But thanks...
and relationships do suck... I think I am destined to be a single girl forever

[abledemotion]

have you written anything else? thats really good. Ive got an old collection of uh..hate? poems that i wrote acouple years ago, wouldnt mind sharing them with you too :)

[thesoftkisses]

hehe.. we could go graba starbucks and sit outside Birkdale and recite poetry like good little scene kids.
;-)
yeah, I used to write alot then my bf at the time made fun of it so I kinda stopped for a while. When I'm provoked its how I express myself best

[mcgebelein]

poetry is definately fun. I used to write all the damn time, but I got out of it, and I've just recently gotten into it again. but yes, I liked your's a lot. very nice.

[thesoftkisses]

thank you dear

[karn611_666]

I liked your poem. May I add you?

[thesoftkisses]

but of course you may
I added you back
;-)

[wolfebear]

You are an absolutely beautiful woman. Mind if I add you?

[thesoftkisses]

thank you!
of course you may...
I added you back

[wolfebear]

Thank you :+)

*hugs & kisses*