Gee Kyle, maybe you shouldn't place the blame of all of America's woes on commercialism, but on the school system that apparently failed you. Let's go over the gross amount of grammatical errors that plague your entry much like Karl plagues this earth. First, it seems that you do not even respect our country enough to capitalize her name. Kudos. Furthermore, "There would be a giant stinking area of rot in frontal lobe" cannot be, in any academic realm, deemed a coherent sentence. This is due to the glaring absence of an article i.e. "the" before "frontal" and after "in." I am going to cover this next topic only once, although its presence can be felt throughout your entry. "Its" is considered (among the non-stupids) possessive in nature. Here's a little example for you: The dog licked its bone. Notice that the "its" helps relate whose bone the dog licked. Conversely, "it's" is a conjunction. This means that two words are combined for convenience’s sake using an apostrophe to substitute the removed letters. Here is another example: It'
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Ok, I’m going to start out by saying: “what the hell do you think you’re doing?” Do you think this is some horrid dating hotline wherein you can purvey your latent sexual desires for someone? I know you must have angst filled pseudo-intellectual rant to write so I’ll make this short; if you want to write about love and a relationship do it on you fucking livejournal. This is dedicated to unique though, philosophy, scientific epiphany, and any other slightly mind altering elucidation one can formulate; not some two-bit “I’m a unfortunate person who can’t quite like you but sure as hell wants to pollute things entertaining the “what ifs” of if I did
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