Dunno about others, but I LOVE this. As a music lover (and creator sometimes) I can say that this is a masterpiece. I can totally understand Tora, not wanting to accept anything out of pity or such, but in the same time is more than grateful for the help. I love how mesmerized Shou was of Tora playing, but I guess all of us are when watching/listening to our favourites.
Please don't stop writing this ♥ You're an inspiration to me and you know I mean what I say ♥♥♥♥
Gnaaahhh it was so hard to write! I'm not an inspiratioooonnn *fumbles around* But yeeaaahh, I guess we're all haunted by emotions when we hear favorite bands/singers.
Hi Lovely~ You updated ^____^ I love how you're writing Shou and his Father's relationship. That his father isn't keen on what Shou is doing but he isn't disowning him or arguing or just in general being an arsehole but a Father. Not particularly liking what Shou is doing but being a support regardless. He is right to have his skepticism but treats his son like an adult.
Shou sitting with Tora is so sweet. I love that part. The fact that even though Shou followed Tora home he didn't burst in and try and be a Saviour. He is human and still puts his own needs above a stranger's that he hardly even knows. In the future he may help and put the other's need higher then his but at this point they are still strangers. I love that.
I love the ending paragraph. I adore your writing. <3.
Well I try to keep it realistic. Not all fathers are assholes and LJ is full of that. It needs more "real" families. But yeah, his father basically has no saying in this since Shou's on his own two feet. Hahahhaa, and yeaaah, I dunno where in real life are super-heroes that just jump and save everything with their mighty mightiness, but yeah. I figured it would be less predictable and more original if I'd write it this way. *shrug* I love youu!
Yeah. I mean there are things that my 'rents haven't wanted me to do but they never stopped me, just expressed their dislike, haha. Oh I hope Shou will prove his Father wrong.
*nods* For some stories that kind of thing works but it has to have a lot of depth to it and is kind of a balancing act with keeping it realistic yet with the 'super-hero' like... that's not that word I'm trying to use but I'm tired and I can't think. Haha x) *Nods* Definitely not that predictable, keeping your readers on the edge for more :3 I love you tooo~ /(^3^)/
I really love your fic you know? I mean, sometimes I get bored pretty easily while reading and all, but I keep reading anyway to see how everything ends, but here my eyes are literally flying over the lines, it's a really pleasant sensation '__' And I like the way those two are behaving, Shou's attempts to help Tora, though I'm worried about this one's health... o_O I hope it's not too bad D8
Oooh, thank you so much! That really means a lot to me. Gnaaah, I can only hope to continue writing this way and keep to your expectations o.o But it was one of the best compliments, so thank you!
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I love how mesmerized Shou was of Tora playing, but I guess all of us are when watching/listening to our favourites.
Please don't stop writing this ♥ You're an inspiration to me and you know I mean what I say ♥♥♥♥
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I'm not an inspiratioooonnn *fumbles around*
But yeeaaahh, I guess we're all haunted by emotions when we hear favorite bands/singers.
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I understand you *nod nod* I know it's hard to write something like this, but you managed to do it wonderfully ♥ ♥
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I love how you're writing Shou and his Father's relationship. That his father isn't keen on what Shou is doing but he isn't disowning him or arguing or just in general being an arsehole but a Father. Not particularly liking what Shou is doing but being a support regardless. He is right to have his skepticism but treats his son like an adult.
Shou sitting with Tora is so sweet. I love that part.
The fact that even though Shou followed Tora home he didn't burst in and try and be a Saviour. He is human and still puts his own needs above a stranger's that he hardly even knows. In the future he may help and put the other's need higher then his but at this point they are still strangers.
I love that.
I love the ending paragraph.
I adore your writing.
<3.
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Hahahhaa, and yeaaah, I dunno where in real life are super-heroes that just jump and save everything with their mighty mightiness, but yeah. I figured it would be less predictable and more original if I'd write it this way. *shrug*
I love youu!
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*nods* For some stories that kind of thing works but it has to have a lot of depth to it and is kind of a balancing act with keeping it realistic yet with the 'super-hero' like... that's not that word I'm trying to use but I'm tired and I can't think. Haha x)
*Nods* Definitely not that predictable, keeping your readers on the edge for more :3
I love you tooo~ /(^3^)/
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And I like the way those two are behaving, Shou's attempts to help Tora, though I'm worried about this one's health... o_O I hope it's not too bad D8
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Gnaaah, I can only hope to continue writing this way and keep to your expectations o.o
But it was one of the best compliments, so thank you!
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