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thevignette

Another Life ; HP/DM

Jun 25, 2007 17:14

I promised something, and so here it is. It's a ficlet, just 752 words but I hope it's appreciated all the same.

Also loads of hugs and kisses to the lovely reizaine who did a Brian/Justin picspam for my birthday (which is tomorrow) :D You've made my day, honey- it's been a day of exams and you know how those ruin your day.

Anyway onto the ficlet!

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harry/draco, fic: hp

Comments 21

enablelove June 26 2007, 19:50:35 UTC

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!

thevignette June 27 2007, 02:48:56 UTC

Thank you! :D

mister_beck June 29 2007, 00:54:14 UTC

Awesome fic. :D

Very bittersweet the ending was, and I'm a little disappointed at Draco-I thought he would be the type to keep on waiting for Harry even after Harry said he didn't want him around.

Still, I love the way you formatted the story and the way you wrote Harry.

thevignette July 1 2007, 04:34:16 UTC

Thank you :D I'm glad you enjoyed this.

lokifan July 1 2007, 22:14:32 UTC

I love this so much. I feel so sorry for them both - the imagery of Draco was brilliantly written, even though he was so wide-eyed it hurt. Silly Harry. Poor him, but I actually feel worse for Draco - he tried so hard, and leaving someone he loved to try and make a life must have been painful.

thevignette July 2 2007, 01:31:26 UTC

They're both so gut-wrenching in this, aren't they? As for Harry, he has this whole past he can't leave behind, and a future he can't quite take without feeling guilty, and Draco has to either wait for something that might never come, or leave and find someone else who will never live up to Harry.

Thanks so much for the comment :D

ex_reizaine184 July 15 2007, 11:37:23 UTC

)': i love this, all the emotion and the tenderness and the could-have-beens.

I think of you too- you with your jokes that are never funny, you with your buttermilk hair and luminous hair, you with your heart in your hands.

such beautiful writing!

exams went well, i hope? *hugs and kisses you back* :D

thevignette July 15 2007, 13:19:33 UTC

Thank you :D

The exams were... alright, I suppose- not as bad as they could have been, so I ought to be satisfied (:

ex_reizaine184 July 22 2007, 00:37:17 UTC

I'M HERE!!! Okay, merits first, the chase for Horcruxes was pretty neat, like how it all fit in, though I'm thinking some might say it was too easy. Like I said, Draco was fantastic cause he was real. Scared to death but he held on, and... he said Harry was his savior!!! That was teh cutest, although I wish he didn't get married. Or Harry, for that matter ( ... )

thevignette July 22 2007, 03:04:55 UTC

YAY YOU'RE HERE :D I personally felt the Horcrux was too short and too simple ( ... )

ex_reizaine184 July 22 2007, 15:22:28 UTC

OMG I was SO mad about Sirius Black. What's the point of doing the whole veil thing, of it being "a jet of red light" instead of green one that made him fall, if she wasn't gonna say ANYTHING about it!? I really thought it was something special and essential to the plot but Sirius just cameos to tell Harry dying is like falling asleep. Like, that's it??? You know actually, "that's it?" just about sums up what I felt about the book. I thought she got the pace all right and the chase was fast if not the most challenging, but really it was the little details (!!!) we were looking forward to, wasn't it?

The poor Marauders, they are so interesting but the backstory on them is pathetic. Especially James: was there anything I missed about how Lily went from can't-stand-this-bloody-bastard to marrying him? I tend to mix up fic and canon so my facts are all over the place:$ ONE THING I'M SURE OF THOUGH: Lupin's death, holy shit, that was such a let down. I didn't even know he died until about, two pages later (if that makes sense). I'd refer ( ... )

ex_reizaine184 July 22 2007, 16:16:17 UTC

I TOTALLY CAN'T RESIST THE ASS SHIP XD XD XD Just for the names, just for the names.

Now I need to find Dumbledore/Grindelvald cause I think they've got potential, lol!