apocabigbang: Before the Devil Knows You're Dead, 1/3

[thevinegarworks]

MASTERPOST; PART ONE; PART TWO; PART THREE

Title: Before the Devil Knows You're Dead
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Characters: Dean/Castiel; Bobby, Castiel, Chuck, Crowley, Dean, Gabriel, Sam.
Words: 25,237
Warnings: Adult language, character death (sort of?), brief nonexplicit sexuality, brief violence, alcohol appreciation a la Chuck.
Summary: In which

Comments

[sycophantastic]

Just made it through this part. I like all the different perspectives, all the different voices. You've worked out their unique tones really well. Chuck's annoyed and tired, Sam and Dean are concerned for each other, Castiel is otherworldly and sincere... I could definitely see all of this happening in my minds eye.

I'm going on to the next part right now. I'm loving it and I neeeeed to know what happens! I just hope... I hope the end isn't soul crushing. I shall of course survive if it is but I may curl up in a ball and weep for a while if someone stays dead. Just sayin'. I'm a big damn baby when it comes to angsty endings.

Also, one more thing - I like how you verbed "white-knuckle." :D

[super_seme04]

...WHY WAS THIS NOT THE EPISODE WE GOT?!

*SHAKES FIST AT *ALL* LIVING CREATURES*

:D We need to infiltrate you into the writers for Show because this is just so easy to devour and your word choice just makes it flow so nicely! Also, characterizations are ace so kudos to you, chickie!

*RUNS TO THE SECOND PART*

[elvisglasses5]

YAY!!! A free Saturday afternoon, and I'm finally getting a chance to curl up with my laptop and read this. : )

Had to comment on this part before moving on: He blinks hard against the memory of the intangible white mass of too many arms and piercing gray eyes and huge wings like blades that came out of Castiel's body in that split second before he went everywhere at once - the memory of what Castiel really is. He tries to relate that...thing to the unassuming hunched businessman's body in front of him and simply can't.

I love this idea of Chuck having seen Cas's true form. ♥

[remkaz2y5]

Gluuuuh!! This is so beyond awesome I can't even begin to describe how much I love it :D

Whenever I read mystery-things I always switch off the part of my brain that guesses what will happen next. So I;m sitting here thinking "ooh oooooh what'll happen now???" like an excited two-year-old at Christmas.

You, are awesome. And I am running off to read the next part RIGHT NOW.

[lassroyale]

FUCK. Everything about this is so careful, thoughtful really, the way you choose your words. Every facet is brilliantly imagined. Also? I'm SUPER jealous of your writing. Great job! Off to read other parts. :)