fic: So Sleep in the Fallout Tonight

[thevinegarworks]

I am definitely not procrastinating homework right now. Quick! A distraction technique!

Title: So Sleep in the Fallout Tonight
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Rating: R
Warnings: Spoilers for 5x18, slight bloodplay.
Words: 1,745
Summary: Pushing, always pushing for a response, for causality, and now that he has it it's terrifying. It could take him apart

Comments

[nyoka]

OMG. I WOKE UP TO THIS BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF EPIC D/C STORYTELLING! THANK YOU, HON!

This is fantastic -- and yes, this is my canon. Guh, you hit so many of my kinks. Intense, dark, lyrical, hot, and powerful, with wonderful descriptions full of such vibrant energy that the fic just draws you and hits you full in the gut -- relentless.

There is no breath, no sound - only blood and ache and Castiel's face, close enough that Dean sees every detail even in this dead alleyway light, sharp and filtered fluorescent, paling their skin, carving them out like corpses.

Beautifully described!

Dean thinks it's a fundamental flaw, that Castiel can break him so much easier with this, with a kiss, than by beating him until he is boneless and quivering. And a testament, too, empirical evidence of the depths Castiel has found beneath Dean's skin, the constant spin of him inside Dean's skull since day one. He knows him, knows just how to push and dig and own.

I JUST WANT TO LIVE IN THIS PASSAGE. THE CORE OF D/C FOR ME.

...Dean feels the silver flash

[thevinegarworks]

AWESOME LONG COMMENT IS LONG AND AWESOME. \o/

I JUST WANT TO LIVE IN THIS PASSAGE. THE CORE OF D/C FOR ME.

*packs suitcases* I will live there with you, bb! That is them to me too; I'm glad it came across well!

So damn beautiful -- kindred souls in all things, even in this heartbreak, and Dean feeling so guilty for bringing Castiel to this place.

Poor Dean bb, he is constantly pulled a thousand different directions. He needs and wants what he can never have, and he loves Cas like this but knows it's lethal for him, knows that means he's also losing him, yet he wants nothing more than to keep him. GUH. THESE BOYS.

BLOODPLAY KINK FTW!

And the rest of your comments just. *FLAILS* I'm so, so happy you liked this, honeybee! I'll be blushing for a week now. ;D

Thank you again! Ilu~ ♥

[entangled_now]

This is just perfect. You write them together so sharply and so beautifully.

[thevinegarworks]

Thank you, hon! That's a beautiful thing to hear, especially coming from someone whose writing I enjoy so immensely. ♥

[blacktofade]

This is a perfect post-5x18 fic and it's filled a gap inside me. I love the amount of need and fight both Dean and Castiel have and how you get it across within this. Why on earth can't this be canon??

[thevinegarworks]

*beams* Thank you so much! I think their need and fight are both very well-balanced, though slightly skewed at times. And...well, maybe if we wish really really hard, it will become canon?

Thanks for reading! ♥

[super_seme04]

*FLAILS FOREVER*

DID I MISS THE MEMO FOR SQUEE/EMBARRASSING NOISE INDUCING PORN TODAY?!

[thevinegarworks]

I SENT IT OUT EARLIER. MAYBE YOU WERE OUT AT THE TIME.

THANK YOU, SWEETNESS. ♥

[super_seme04]

CURSES! *SHAKES FIST*

;) YOU'RE WELCOME, CHICKIE.

*SCURRIES BACK TO STUDYING*

[dotfic]

Whoa, that was powerful, I love how you've explored the dynamic between them in a way that cuts down to the bone.

[thevinegarworks]

Thank you so much! The constant shift of their dynamic will never cease to intrigue/inspire/amaze me. I'm really glad you enjoyed the fic! ♥