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thevinegarworks

fic: So Sleep in the Fallout Tonight

Apr 27, 2010 01:56

I am definitely not procrastinating homework right now. Quick! A distraction technique!

Title: So Sleep in the Fallout Tonight
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Rating: R
Warnings: Spoilers for 5x18, slight bloodplay.
Words: 1,745
Summary: Pushing, always pushing for a response, for causality, and now that he has it it's terrifying. It could take him apart ( Read more... )

rated: r, fic: spn, pairing: dean/castiel

Comments 58

molokomolotov April 30 2010, 23:57:00 UTC

I AM SO LATE but this was perfect. it was exactly (or as close to perfect as i could imagine except my only thought was, "WALL SEX + BLOODPLAY!!!!!!!") but i love how you've captured the emotional state of that particular scene.

thevinegarworks May 1 2010, 20:53:16 UTC

That's a nice thought process! ;D

Thanks so much for reading! I'm happy you enjoyed it. ♥

mulder200 May 1 2010, 23:10:38 UTC

Oh poor boys! So broken, so hurt! You fit the mood perfectly.

thevinegarworks May 2 2010, 04:46:46 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you thought so. ♥

squeemonster May 1 2010, 23:22:43 UTC

Gorgeous and hot and heartbreaking, bb.

thevinegarworks May 2 2010, 04:47:10 UTC

Thank you, my love. ♥!

affablyevil May 1 2010, 23:34:36 UTC

This entire piece was gorgeous and lyrical and unbelievable. I'm too blown away to form a coherent reply. Pitch-perfect and incredible, the desperation you wove here felt real but at the same time your prose was lovely.

If I played "quote it back to the author" of the parts that were particularly great, I might as well cut-and-paste the entire fic. However, these two lines, especially, made me have to stop for a long moment:
Dean becomes a ghost of himself, hard and wanting, moving against Castiel's body. He becomes wild and needing, pleading when he licks at Castiel's lips and says please, over and over and over.

There's an ache behind his ribs he can't name, whether broken bone or something deeper - a bruise darkening on his jaw, a cut gaping on his lip and a complementary burst of red on Castiel's knuckle.

Thank you for sharing with us such an powerful piece. Wow.

thevinegarworks May 2 2010, 04:51:15 UTC

Oh my goodness, what a lovely comment. *blush* Thank you so much!

I'm glad those lines really worked for you. That moment was so desperate and climactic (no pun intended, uh) for both of them; I'm happy you thought the fic conveyed that.

Really, thank you again! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. ♥

vivhasarifle May 1 2010, 23:51:28 UTC

*Flails* Oh sweet lord. That is just...yeah.

Thanks for this. :)

thevinegarworks May 2 2010, 04:48:48 UTC

Thanks for reading! I'll take the flailing as a good sign. :)