[fic] J/M; Trick Your Lover That You're Wicked

[thevinegarworks]

Title: Trick Your Lover That You're Wicked
Rating: NC-17
Pairing/Characters: Jensen/Misha
Words: 2,649
Summary: Misha is a slippery thing, all fluid and adaptation, bleeding around sharp edges formless and smooth as liquid. He doesn't think anything could ever truly break someone so unbreakable. In comparison, Jensen is brittle at best. (Or, the

Comments

[qthelights]

UNF. OMG baby this was so freakin' good. SO GOOD. I love the tone you've set, the wanting and the running and the honesty and avoiding. It's gorgeously bittersweet. As well as insanely hot.

And I had lots of favourite lines. Some of them:

Trying to re-educate himself with breathing and keeping his blood from catching fire.

- fantastic image that

The hitch-and-squeeze of his throat and how Jensen can taste his heart it's beating so hard, crawled straight out of his chest to lodge behind his teeth.

Ditto, imagery.

This whole situation, warm in Misha's bed on a Saturday morning with his head reeling and his cock down Misha's throat, is madness. Fuck that's hot. The 'afterness' of this thought is perfect.

the stalk of his wrist disappears into the line of his pants. That should not be as hot as it is. But jesus. That is almost never done in fic, wanking without seeing it..

It's sticky and uncomfortable and too quiet, and this is not something that friends, that fucking co-workers, are supposed to do and share. I just

[thevinegarworks]

Oh honey, I'm so glad you liked it! I did intend to actually get some of that plot stuff into this part, but uh. The boys had something else in mind, apparently. Which we're not complaining about, of course.

♥ at all your quotebacks. I'm really glad you enjoyed this! Thank you so much, bb. *smishes forever*

[moonlettuce]

It ridiculous how insanely I love this :D

[thevinegarworks]

Yay, I'm glad! Thank you! :D

[ru_salki99]

I tried to read this last night, but exhaustion got the better of me and so I had to finish it this morning. What an amazing story to wake up to! Jensen... that boy's an idiot. But I'm sure he'll get there eventually right? Right? *crosses fingers*

Anyway, thanks for this. You're awesome :D

[thevinegarworks]

Jensen has a long way to go, but in future parts? Maybe he'll get somewhere, at least. :)

Thank you for reading! I'm happy you enjoyed it. ♥

[kaylbunny]

Oh my. Probably shouldn't have read this at work because now i'm going to be thinking of it all day. But what a lovely thought, though ;D

Love Misha in this, his fluidity and seeming ease with Jensen's freak out. Will you be doing anything from his POV?

[thevinegarworks]

Fact: porn makes the workday go by faster. \o/

Thank you, bb! And yes, I'm toying with making part 3 from his POV. It will be quite different, but we'll see. :)

iluuuu ♥

[i_rise_inside]

Jesus. This was fucking perfect! Forgive my crudeness and incoherence, but I truly do not have the words to describe what this did to me! Misha was so Misha, all tease and mindgames, indefinable and more irresistible for it, but not entirely without vulnerability. Jensen was very Jensen, curious and wanting, inexplicably, helplessly drawn and hating it, terrified of it. The porn was hot, and unbearably intense. And your prose is rich and layered and so fucking beautiful I could drown in it. I want to read it again and again, cuz there's just SO MUCH there. I cannot wait for the next instalments.

[thevinegarworks]

all tease and mindgames

Yep, that's Misha for ya. :)

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed this and that you liked the characterizations. This comment made my day, seriously. I hope the next installments don't disappoint! And again, thank you! ♥