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vinniebolzano May 23 2010, 20:30:50 UTC
That was absolutely beautiful.
Love this line : " Logic triumphed, and her heart tore."

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thewaiting19 May 23 2010, 20:40:45 UTC
Wow, thank you so much!

I feel like she knows that the separation is necessary, but if that final scene illustrated anything to me, it's that she's starting to realize that rationalization can't guard her from emotions anymore.

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vinniebolzano May 23 2010, 21:04:24 UTC
I know what you mean. That last scene was so charged with things left unsaid that it almost hurt,but yes the separation should do the two some good especially put things into perspective for her. The way Cam went O my God I thing she was expecting something to happen aswell.

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buffyangellvr23 May 24 2010, 03:07:51 UTC
nice job :)

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thewaiting19 May 24 2010, 19:52:46 UTC
Thanks for reading! :)

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twinsparadox May 24 2010, 04:44:58 UTC
OMG. This fic is amazing, and what an incredible first one!! I too, was inspired to post my first Bones fic after this ep, and you captured the power and raw emotion of it so well. You're writing is fantastic, and I hope we see more from you!!! You should post this bad boy on fanfiction.net:)

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thewaiting19 May 24 2010, 19:56:23 UTC
Well, wow, thanks! I couldn't have asked for a bigger compliment!

If I can muster up the courage (/time /effort) to write more, I might consider a ff.net account. For now it's nice sticking around the familiar 206, hah.

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