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Feb 07, 2005 21:57

Blank looks, glazed over eyes, slack expressions, they all hide a myriad of pseudo intellectual “adventures,” with each quest taking off in a different direction, while trying only to ignore the deafening tick of the second hand as the clock spins in an unbearably slow clockwise direction, which seems to take on not a smidge of resemblance to the ( Read more... )

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dichotomyj February 10 2005, 18:40:42 UTC
What were your words? "I think I'm doomed, as far as the sentences go." I think that was what you said, in message if not in words. So I say unto you, Hah!

I also have to say, I dig the way it's written- the string of consciousness feel of it makes it resemble something that was scribbled on scratch paper while bored. Not only that, but you're describing a feeling that's so alien to you. I mean, boredom? Especially during a lecture! I could never believe it! No way! Impossible! Other startlingly sarcastic statement of incredulity!

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darktitan February 17 2005, 04:32:42 UTC
Absolutely brilliant writing Rebecca. You have a strange ability to pull out all these formal literary words that you never use in real life. I like it. Dark-eyed stranger, huh? Hmmmm.

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