A-Team fic; What If (Part Two)

[stackcats]

Title: What If? - part 2
Fandom: The A Team 2010
Characters/pairings: The whole team, OCs, eventual Hannibal/Face
Summary: Face takes charge of a plan for the second time; Hannibal fucks it up like a boss.
Wordcount:13,508 (full)

Part one

Comments

[snack_size]

Wow. This lived up to my expectations and more - and I'm not even that much into H/F, but this made it believable and true. I think you ended at just the right place - and I like the epilouge from Hannibal's POV. Really well done - I can see how this one got so epic, and I'm glad it did.

[tolerik]

Too many lines I loved in this. If I chose them all I'd have to quote nearly the whole thing. But this snippet:

So I’m still kind of the boss?”

“Kind of. In a very narrow and specific sense.”

So perfectly them ;) This was well worth the wait. Loved it! Hannibal breaking down the door; the banter between them and BA's assessment of their relationship. Plus HM being like a homicidal ferret in a fight!

[saintdogstreet]

Gah. This is ridiculously beautiful and wonderful and perfect. Love it. <3

[delorita]

OMG OMG OMG THAT WAS PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I forgot what the original prompt was, just want to tell you that this is just a SUPERPERFECT story for the two! LOVE me a really good plot and some angst and then the supersexyhot Happy End! Well done, you! I am in awe at your writing skill and almost breathless from reading this. Certainly in character, all of them! Just WOW!!!

Ghosts of posts past

[pixiepatti]

Okay, I know you posted this TWO YEARS ago, but it is brand new to me. I couldn't pass by without telling you how much I enjoyed it. So... happy 2 year anniversary. ;)