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[thewriterchick]

Fandom: One Piece
Word count: 1,395
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance, Angst
Pairing(s): Sanji x Luffy. Implied Usopp x Nami and Zoro x Vivi.

Comments

[hasukerz]

Aw... that was cute! Luffy sure did talk funny, but that makes him all the more adorable. Erk, Zoro x Vivi? Well, I think it's an interesting couple since Vivi always calls Zoro "Mr. Bushido." Hooray to hinted UsoNa, even though that means making Sanji sad. =( Well, at least this way I'm glad Luffy can make Sanji feel better! *hearts fic*

[staff_of_truth]

Talked funny? Hmm. Do you think it was out of character? ^^;;; This is my first full length OP fic and I'm not sure if I portrayed all the characters correctly.

I like Zoro x Vivi. XD It's cute so I decided to just put in some hints of it...since I've never seen it elsewhere.

[weaseldog_ltg09]

That was very cute and sweet! I really enjoyed the mix of feelings expressed, and it was interesting how Luffy was in exactly the same boat as Sanji.

Here's my grammatical analysis:
"Despite his efforts, she was just had no interest in him..." - Remove the word 'was'.
"That goofball has actually had those kinds of feelings?" - The word 'has' should probably be 'had'.

I think I might have missed something else, but that's alright. You're a great writer and your grammar errors have always been few and far between!

[staff_of_truth]

XD Exactly the same boat? That's almost a cheesy pun in a way.

Thank you for pointing out those errors! I'll fix 'em soon. My stupid computer grammar/spell check is TEH SUX OMG.

RANDOM: Lookie, Sanji face= ^_\\\ He's having an uncontrollable hair day.

[hasukerz]

Well, I'm not exactly trying to say Luffy was out of character, I just don't really hear him say "ya" and "yer" in other fics I've read. I mean, I know he's talking that way based on his personality, and that's cute, but I just don't see it much. And I think you've portrayed the characters pretty well for your first full length OP fic.

Well, I suppose Zoro x Vivi could use a little more fics. I've only really seen Vivi get paired up with Luffy, and I don't really like that pair... Actually, I really wanna see an Usopp x Vivi fic written. I know that's a strange pair, but they were together on Drum Island.

Oh, and that's such a cute Sanji emoticon! *thinks about using it on AIM*

[thewriterchick]

OMG!! I love your new icon!! <3

Well, I am trying to imitate his way of talking but maybe I failed? XD I dunno. I think it's kind of correct. I used to have Luffy talk that way when I used to roleplay him a while back and nobody ever said it was wrong.

USOPP X VIVI!!! That's so cute and I never even thought of that pairing before. Hee! C'mon, plot bunnies, bite me! ^_^; Though, UsoNam and UsoSan(and SanUsoNam) are my favorites!

...UsoZo also has a place in my heart. Somewhere.

[hasukerz]

Oh, thank you thank you! I am an embarrassment to all avatar makers with my lack of skill, but I appreciate your comment very much! ^___^

Er, maybe I'm letting the way Luffy talks sink into my head too much. It isn't a problem, really!

Well, I have thought of Usopp x Vivi, and my sister seems to like it too, but you know I would much rather prefer UsoNa. ^_~ Well, whenever those plot bunnies ever decide to bite you (hee hee), I'll be the first to read! Oh, oh, ohhh~! I love the idea of SanUsoNa, though I don't really like SanNa (never really liked the obvious one-sided pairs that become... two-sided).

UsoZo is so cute! Well, I love pairing Usopp with so many people, I even considered Usopp x Robin. I feel like a true weirdo sometimes.

[staff_of_truth]

Naw! I loved the icon, it looks better than others I've seen.

SanNa is cute. And I love the UsoSanNam love triangle/threesome/what have you. My friend wrote a fic for me about them a long time ago. Would you like a link to it? =)

Okay. While I never thought of UsoVi, I did toy around with the idea of UsoRob. It'd be so damn hot! XD Blah. ZoRob makes me sick. Probably since A. I've never seen good fic of it, B. None of the doujinshi looks good and C. Their interaction makes Zoro OOC from what I've seen.

And SanZo is not cool either but that's a different story.

I might tackle something from another series. Any suggestions? ^__^

[hasukerz]

Hehe, yeah, USSDOP is pretty hilarious, well, except the time when Zoro just blew up like that 'cuz he was buffing up too much. *lmao* Well, for the most part, it's just so amusing. Well, I guess what made me love OP so much is that I barely dislike any characters compared to other anime. *coughMistycough* Gasp, you don't like Zoro? *sniffle* Well, I can't help what your opinion is, so that's alright with me.

Yes, she likes ZoNa muchly. Currently, she's looking for friends, and it's kind of amusing. *giggle* Oh whoops, I realized that's how you found me. *sweat drops* Ehehe... I take that all back!

Ooo, original Pokemon fics? Yeah, I've read a few that are pretty cliched. Yay, I bet your project will turn out to be a hit. ^_^ Good luck with that!

[staff_of_truth]

I don't hate Zoro, though. He's my least favorite compared to the other Straw Hats.

And I commented on her journal! I hope she's interested in bein' my friend. ^_^

Aaaaand the fic project is located at poke_project. It's empty right now but we are gonna post there later today.

[hasukerz]

Oh, that's alright. I wouldn't have minded if you hated him though... I think. ^^;

Yay, I think she'd like making a new friend. Thanks! ^^

Oh, I see. Well, I'll check again when you update!

[staff_of_truth]

Ooh! We updated the poke_project! =D

[vulpixi_misa]

Yo there! I read this before I got an LJ, but I'll read it again.

Lurve the SanLu-ness of it. *thwaps nee-san* Luffy did not talk funny. It's how he would talk if translated into English. ( I assume... but I think it fits.) I love the hinted UsoNami and the ZoroVivi. ZoroxVivi is cute, but I prefer it to be one-sided(from Vivi's side), since ZoroxNami is the pairing for me.

Mmm... Can you write a full length ZoroxVivi fic sometime? Eh, if it's not to much trouble that is. I just want to read a fic on them since their fanart kinda disturbs me...

[thewriterchick]

=D Wow! Thank you! Sorry I didn't comment before. LJ didn't send me the comment notification. x__x It does that often enough.

And yes, I had him talk like that because that's how imagine he should speak in english.

Well, I like ZoVi and ZoNa. And ZoLu, too. I tend to multiship in all my fandoms as you can see. ^_^;

Sure! I might try a Zoro x Vivi fic sometime! It'd be lots of fun. Plus it would be nice to have more het pairing fic in this fandom(SanNa and LuNa are the most popular).