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Mersenne Primes

Sep 22, 2006 19:03

Title: Mersenne Primes
Fandom: Numb3rs
Pairing: Don/Charlie
Rating: Mature for adult sexual content, language, mathematics
Length: ~2,300 words
Summary: The first rule of fucking your brother in the shower is -- you do not talk about fucking your brother in the shower. Apologies to Chuck Palahniuk, Fight Club.Warnings: incest, underage (NOT ( Read more... )

don, numb3rs, don/charlie, charlie, porn

Comments 13

hermyone6 September 23 2006, 00:47:08 UTC

I like it. The numbers and the rest. How they both seem very "adult" about this thing between them and yet not.
Sorry, maybe it doesn't make sense. But I like it. A lot. Very well written.

meletor_et_al September 23 2006, 04:38:31 UTC

thank you. I do understand what you mean, I think. it's hard to describe, but yeah. I'm glad you found it in my writing. thank you very much for your feedback :)

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meletor_et_al September 23 2006, 04:43:42 UTC

oh, the boys are so messed up, they are. but yes -- it's the growing up and with each other parts I was trying to highlight, so I'm very very happy that worked. thank you!

rubynye September 23 2006, 03:05:36 UTC

That's a great use of math, of details, and of a shared, intertwined history. And, I'm not sure how you pulled this off, but the POV switches contributed to rather than distracting from the story.

Also? This is hot like fire. *fans self* Wow.

*applauds*

meletor_et_al September 23 2006, 04:53:29 UTC

thank you very much. the POV switches were a bit of a hassle at first, but then we started working together and it all came out in the wash. I'm super glad to hear it actually did have a good effect, and I wasn't just making that up.

*g* thank you. may as well toss some porn in with the angst, hm?

.:: curtseys ::.

jaredsexual September 23 2006, 05:19:41 UTC

pr0n!

pr0npr0npr0npr0npr0npr0n! YAY. *cough*

the rest of it was uber spectacular, which you know. :D

meletor_et_al September 23 2006, 14:53:16 UTC

heeeeeeeeee.

thank you, love. I'm glad you think so :D

chelletoo September 24 2006, 02:40:05 UTC

I like the use of numbers. How Charlie realizes he is a part of Don and it doesn't matter that Don doesn't get the numbers.

Also, a nice look at their earlier years.

meletor_et_al September 25 2006, 03:00:11 UTC

thank you very much. I'm glad the numbers worked for you; I was excited to play with them :)