Another Aurikku, considerably worse.

[theycallmebacon]

Ok, so this is crap, but I'm posting it because I want to post something and this isn't going to get any better. I need to stick with my more abstract style :D

Title: Childish
Summary: He gives her piggyback rides sometimes.

Comments

[melisandre013]

Adorable. For real. I love you, Bacon, dear.

[theycallmebacon]

I wuv you more, shnookums. :D

[sansukumile]

This was short and totally lovely - not too long or drawn out, just enough to satisfy for the idea, y'know? I like how it has Rikku overtones, but still keeps well into third person. I also admit that I love reading how the rest of the group reacts in fanfiction to the 'taboo' pairing, so that sentence - "...man indulging a girl's whims" - really wrapped everything up nicely. Wonderful story. :3

[aeonofthefayth]

Yes it does satisfy the idea doesn't it. The ending was nice because it was really a begining and that's always heartening. The Rikku overtones- or rather your style was slightly confusing to me becuase it wasn't actually Rikku talking. I liked it!