Watching Life - And So It Begins

[theycallmebacon]

Title: Watching Life - Prologue
Summary: It was common knowledge that the Pendragons ruled South Boston.
Fandom: Merlin
Pairing: Eventual Merlin/Arthur
Rating: PG now, to change in later chapters
Word Count: 301

Comments

[souzoukyuuketsu]

Aaaah I'm hooked already ! (I know that is the proper function of a prologue, but that doesn't mean it works every time.)

So I'm hooked and I'm really wondering WHY Merlin would want to kill Arthur (because of something about his mother? Did Arthur have her killed or something? Intentionally or not?)

So yeah, really looking forward to next chapter !

[fujiappletan]

HELL YES.
is all my mind can come up with at this hour and most hours. but oh. OH YES.

ps. Gaius is awesome, haha. i think i have a slight eyebrow fetish.

[lady81bird]

Well, I am intrigued.

BTW - a typo in second paragraph: Gauis instead of Gaius.

:D

[blookie]

*GASP*
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES!

My brain is a tiny whirlwind of omgthisisgonnabesocoolIcan'twaitformoreomgomgwooyeaaah! and exploding.

[callistianstar]

That last line has me like "wosh!" lol. And you even felt the need to have Hunith die which is sad (with the Pendragons probably causing her death). I look forward to the next chapter and where you take this. Very interesting so far. Nice job.