ohmygodyessssss I loved the casual tone of this. And the use of present tense, though I didn't notice it until now. :P The movement between perspectives added a lot, and flowed really well. The parts with Eli and Kevin angst-ing over each other were very emotionally resonant. My heart clenched for them. And then poor, sweet AJ trying to make his move... All those articulate remarks aside, ohmyfreakinggod this was so hottttttttttttt ahhhhhhhhhhhh This was the threesome I wanted to imagine, but couldn't on my own. Your skills, I bow to them.
Sweet jesus fuck that was great. I've being struggling to find well-written U-Kiss fanfiction but yours are absolutely my favorty by far. Oh god, I wish all smut fiction was as well written and just plain hot as yours. Seriously, you are great.
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I loved the casual tone of this. And the use of present tense, though I didn't notice it until now. :P The movement between perspectives added a lot, and flowed really well. The parts with Eli and Kevin angst-ing over each other were very emotionally resonant. My heart clenched for them. And then poor, sweet AJ trying to make his move...
All those articulate remarks aside, ohmyfreakinggod this was so hottttttttttttt ahhhhhhhhhhhh
This was the threesome I wanted to imagine, but couldn't on my own. Your skills, I bow to them.
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