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Fic: The Last Parting (Nathan Barley/Mint Royale!Fast Fuse-verse)

Jul 11, 2010 15:49

Title: The Last Parting
Fandom: Nathan Barley/Mint Royale (Fast Fuse universe)
Pairing: Dan/Sasha, Jon/Neil mentioned, past Dan/Jones!Neil
Rating: PG
Warnings: Erm ... het pairings? Imaginary Cornish towns?
Word Count: 2700
Disclaimer: Nathan Barley belongs to Brooker and Morris. Mint Royale belongs to Edgar Wright. The Fast Fuse universe is on ( Read more... )

fic? in my lj? never

Comments 7

the_reverand July 11 2010, 20:47:15 UTC

Oh! Wonderful! Sasha is so lovely. I love her! I love her with Dan. And the goodbye was very sweet, and poor Neil for being so torn that he has to ask DAN, of all people, for love/life advice! :)

Wonderful Sunday afternoon read! :D

thickets July 16 2010, 13:19:27 UTC

Heh, Dan has to have come a long way for anyone to consider him suitable to give them advice. XD

Thanks for the comment and I'm so relieved you like Sasha! XD Sorry for the late reply!

eggnogged July 11 2010, 22:35:29 UTC

Eeeeee, I've read this like 4 times now. <3

I love that line you picked for the lj-cut, I meant to mention it in my email.

Also,
"Me as well." They look at each other, both trying to figure out what the appropriate way to say goodbye is, for the last time, and for the first time, because that weird day at the hospital hadn't been a proper goodbye, not really. Then Dan thinks, fuck it, and pulls Jones into a loose, friendly hug. Jones gives a little laugh of relief.
Aaaaaw! ;_; <3

pitpony13 July 12 2010, 01:24:00 UTC

This is so amazing! I love Dan and Sasha together and that Dan finally got his goodbye and some closure. Poor Neil, though, trying to figure out his dilemma.

Wonderful, wonderful work!

silent_fields July 12 2010, 03:27:52 UTC

Aaaah he turned SA into a music magazine and named it House of Jones. Oh Dan ;_;

I love what you've done with all the characters, the way everyone has shifted very believable. I also liked the way you handled Neil's continuing struggle between his work and private life. From what story Neil has so far, Dan does seem like right person to ask such a question.

And much love for Sasha in general, but especially her little hide the pajamas trick. ;)

thirstyrobot July 12 2010, 18:36:04 UTC

MOAR LOVE for this. <3 <3 <3

I think I completely missed the bit about the house on the hill the first time, so it was a nice sort of surprise that I really like the feeling of.

I also didn't mention Dan being good at being an uncle and the new name for the magazine both making me smile. :)