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indusnm February 18 2011, 07:19:53 UTC
This was beautiful. Horribly painful, and I'm glad you gave it time and that Sherlock still apologized- I'm a nasty vindictive person and well, death alone wouldn't let me forgive. He'd have to say exactly what Sherlock did, never again, and mean it ( ... )

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thingsbaker February 18 2011, 15:09:52 UTC
Fake death wouldn't make me forgive, either! I'm glad that worked for you. I still kind of hated Sherlock at the end, too, so it's good to know I'm not alone. It is a terrible thing. I can't believe it wouldn't have an effect on everything going forward, you know?

I'm glad you read it, and thank you for the wonderful comment!

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indusnm February 18 2011, 19:00:47 UTC
Your welcome ( ... )

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indusnm February 18 2011, 07:36:13 UTC
Sorry- that should be, didn't even give one. Again, great job!

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miss_variety February 18 2011, 10:05:11 UTC
You nearly had me in tears, and I never cry at fic. This was truly heartrending, when John finds out, the utter desolation when he moves, all the pain. I've never been cheated on, but here I can certainly understand what John's going through, and when he lists all the faults in the cafe you can really see how it's affected him, and how unaware Sherlock is. And the add in of canon worked beautifully, and the ending, where they'll still hurt each other, just not as badly... brilliant.

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thingsbaker February 18 2011, 15:13:42 UTC
Aw, I'm sorry about the crying, but thank you for the beautiful comment!

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ext_420941 February 18 2011, 11:51:48 UTC
I just finished my box of tissues ( ... )

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thingsbaker February 18 2011, 16:22:25 UTC
Ooh, sorry about the tissues! I do think John would have done well in the job Lestrade offered, but he wasn't yet ready to do well in anything, you know? I'm a John-worshipper, too, which makes it so much more fascinating: what is this guy DOING with Sherlock? I'm so glad you liked it; thank you for the wonderful, long comment. I do so appreciate it.

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light_the_sky76 February 18 2011, 12:48:02 UTC
This made my heart ache. Ache I tell you :)

Lovely

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thingsbaker February 18 2011, 16:20:51 UTC
Oh, thank you!

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